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Blow The Whistle
Is it post traumatic if the traumatic never even stopped?
If you copped the call for the fall although they flopped?
Cause his Pop had the privilege and leverage of owning the whistle
And body cams ran outta RAM before recording Pete's Pistol
Then after further review, the grand crew in the stands
Ruled it justifiable and told you to kill your demands
Like Peter Pan, their view is that you are forever young boy
Until needed to build a fort on the court before you deploy
Endorsed by Chips Ahoy and warmonger toys of full bandoleers
Given to you to do the unquestionable bidding of auctioneers
Profiteers of prophet tears as clear skies change to pouring rain
Having you do something strange for some change; leaving your FAM in pain
If you copped the call for the fall although they flopped?
Cause his Pop had the privilege and leverage of owning the whistle
And body cams ran outta RAM before recording Pete's Pistol
Then after further review, the grand crew in the stands
Ruled it justifiable and told you to kill your demands
Like Peter Pan, their view is that you are forever young boy
Until needed to build a fort on the court before you deploy
Endorsed by Chips Ahoy and warmonger toys of full bandoleers
Given to you to do the unquestionable bidding of auctioneers
Profiteers of prophet tears as clear skies change to pouring rain
Having you do something strange for some change; leaving your FAM in pain
Published 15th Mar 2022
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15th Mar 2022 11:06pm
Short but so dang powerful dude we love your play on words also, to freaking tight
16th Mar 2022 5:45am
22nd Mar 2022 5:14pm
The two lines on the second stanza are nothing but truth. It leaves me dumbfounded when these juries look the other way or make it justifiable just as you said.
Great write sir.
Great write sir.
24th Mar 2022 1:55pm
28th Mar 2022 9:44am
Blow the whistle indeed
Truly powerful
Sadly the truth of your words makes the platitudes of peace and "justice for all" ring Hollow and Pathetic
Truly powerful
Sadly the truth of your words makes the platitudes of peace and "justice for all" ring Hollow and Pathetic
