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Making Love
The brightness of new life flares behind my eyes
in unison with your manic thrusts. Three, four,
seven, and more! I’m blinded by the silver light and
wrap my legs around you as if I might fall away.
You hold me with an urgency as if you sense my fear.
We reach past our edges, all flesh blending into one.
Egos and knowledge vanish. Conflicts and careers
drift away from a disagreeable world as all
desires become one great thing at the center of us.
When I sense your filling of me is complete, my legs fall away relaxed and open.
At the base of my core I feel the soft echoes of your pubic bone longing to slow
the relentless passing of time.
in unison with your manic thrusts. Three, four,
seven, and more! I’m blinded by the silver light and
wrap my legs around you as if I might fall away.
You hold me with an urgency as if you sense my fear.
We reach past our edges, all flesh blending into one.
Egos and knowledge vanish. Conflicts and careers
drift away from a disagreeable world as all
desires become one great thing at the center of us.
When I sense your filling of me is complete, my legs fall away relaxed and open.
At the base of my core I feel the soft echoes of your pubic bone longing to slow
the relentless passing of time.
Published 12th Mar 2022
Author's Note
Trying to describe the making of love as it is for me now.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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You fill your lovemaking scenes with meaning. Favourite segments:
I..... wrap my legs around you as if I might fall away.
You hold me with an urgency as if you sense my fear.
Conflicts and careers
drift away from a disagreeable world as all
desires become one great thing at the center of us.
I..... wrap my legs around you as if I might fall away.
You hold me with an urgency as if you sense my fear.
Conflicts and careers
drift away from a disagreeable world as all
desires become one great thing at the center of us.
13th Mar 2022 11:35am
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
12th Mar 2022 1:58pm
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13th Mar 2022 11:35am
17th Mar 2022 9:08pm
He is one lucky guy to have you. Orgasmic bliss is a joy. Keep on writing.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Apr 2022 4:45pm
6th Apr 2022 8:56pm
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6th Apr 2022 9:07pm
Thank you. I felt this one deeply and was glad to get the words down to describe those feelings.
30th Aug 2022 4:16pm
It's as if you go on these mini holidays whenever you combine your words to give us an idea of what goes on in your mind in these moments.
4th Sep 2022 5:34pm
Yes. It makes me happy all over again when I'm able to put sensations and private thoughts into words. Thank you for reading!
