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Oh come into my bed again
before the dawn light
gleams the world with dew.
Let us spend some dazing hours now
in learning all
the curves and sumptuous lines
our bodies have
anew.
before the dawn light
gleams the world with dew.
Let us spend some dazing hours now
in learning all
the curves and sumptuous lines
our bodies have
anew.
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Re. lines
11th Mar 2022 5:06am
This mental serenade is beautifully composed in the brevity of your musing, my poet
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Re. lines
5th Apr 2022 9:06am
Very dear Baldwin,
Your style of poetry is very beautiful and shows deep experience. Unfortunately, you are infatuated by one subject, beds and what follows. Why don't you try other subjects? Best regards.
Your style of poetry is very beautiful and shows deep experience. Unfortunately, you are infatuated by one subject, beds and what follows. Why don't you try other subjects? Best regards.
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Re: Re. lines
5th Apr 2022 3:22pm
Thank you for the compliment.
But I find your request that I should write on subjects other that on "beds and what follows", ironic given (1) that it comes from from someone who posts, notably over and over again in the same style and with the same limited range of words, on a very limited number of topics and (2) that the number of reads my "bed" pieces get, (not to mention that others here who are not sycophants like, sometimes revel in, and wish to see more of my dwelling on "beds and what follows", my supposed "infatuation" with this subject is regarded by anyone but prudish you as "unfortunate".
I also find your claim that I don't write about anything other than "beds and what follows" is amusingly false. As the following list of my submissions shows shows, it is, as are the claims you make in your submissions) miserably uninformed.
10th Month
A Challenge to J-Z
A Challenge to J-Z -- and anyone else here who might find it fun to imitate Byron, Yeats, et. al.
A Ditty for Pharaoh
A Ditty on The Wages of Cheating
A Kind of Sonnet
A memory from long ago of Lee
A memory of GF
A Pilgrim to the Trove of You
A poem for you
A Renewed Challenge to J-Z
A Riff on Catullus
A Steven-esque
A summoning
absence
Absent Friends
Abused
Adam
After the Annunciation
After Thomas Hardy's Oxen
afterlife?
Aftermath
age
Age
Aging
Ah Gabriel
All This to Have
An Alexandrine Challenge
An Emulation of Thomas Wyatt's "And Leave Not Yet"
An Etheree
Angels' Song
Annunciation
Another about Gilly
Another Ditty
Another for Anne-C
another kiss
another on J-Z
approaching another birthday
As He Lay Dying
As I decorate my Christmas tree
Ash Wednesday
At First Sight
At Glastonbury
At Night
Augustine's Mistake
Autumn Emptiness
Autumn in Sherwood
awe
Ballerina
Be Gone!
Because of you
Before
Belly Dancer
Cathedrals
Chastity
Christmas Tide
Circe
Come Dance With Me
Culprit Moon
Damn you, Woman
Derbyed Men
distance
Ditty
Do Not Come With Me
Does death deprive?
Does God Care for Ghosts?
Dreams
Dreams
Ekphrasis
Eliot
Esker's Crest
explorer
eyes
Farmer and his gun
Fire eyes
Fog
For Anne-C
For J-Z
For Summer
Giotto's Angel
Give Me Now your Kiss
Gladiators
God
God Help Me Now
God is not Good: Bad Theology
God's Loaves
Golgatha
Golgatha
Grey Wing
Growing Old
Ha Satan
Healing
her crotch
Her Hands
Her laugh
Here
Here's What Comes from Remembering the Past
Hey Joseph-Z
him?
His Cold Fish (for J-Z who won't answer the question of whether he's been desired by women)
How Can I Make you Believe?
How I Wish It Were So
How Many Times?
How will you know
I am religious
I Cannot Understand This Thing Called Soul
I Dreamed a Dream
I Often Sit for Hours
I remember
I Shall Not Share
I Shall Place My Palms
I shall pretend
I want your mouth
I Will Kiss You With My Voice
I wonder
I'll Not be Obedient to Life
If I could be there
If I should craft new lullabies for you
If I should craft some lullabies for you
If You Wish It So
In Emulation of Ovid
In the Brightest of My Rooms
In Want of Words
Incarnation
Indecency
Indolence
J-Z and his "If"
Jealousy
Jesus Cannot Take my Loneliness Away
Jesus' love
Joseph's claims
Joseph's criterion for what makes a poem "great"
Joseph's Response
kiss
Kiss
Kiss Me Now
La Belle Dame sans Merci
Laura
Lazarus
Lies
light
lines
little bastard
Loneliness is a Fish
Longing
Manna from heaven
Mary
Memorial Day
Mitigation
Mortality
Mother Mary
Moths to Flame
My heart
My Heart and Song
My hope for J-Z
My new cat
My pissed off Muse
My Ram
My Skin is Taught
Nativity
night
No Ambiguity
No Jewels
Nostalgia
Not Soon Enough
not voiced
November's Trees
Odysseus the Liar
Oedipus at Thebes
Old Simeon
On J-Z's "From Hands to Hands"
On Yoolis Night
One God?
pale moon
Parts and Wholes
poetical idea
Pope's Complaint
Quit Telling Me that Heaven Is My Home
Ravages
Regret
remember, body
Restraint
September Now
Sheryl
Should We Love What the Braggart Writes
Sin?
Song
Stage Fright
stages
Subservience?
Sunrise Disturbed
surprised
That isn't proof
The Arrogance and Stupidity of Patriarchy
The Bene Elohim at Christmas
The Claim
The Cygnet
The Damning Present
The fallacy known as poisoning the well
The Glisten Gray
The Intent of Mary's Words to Me
the narcissist J-Z!
the power
the power of the vagina
The Purpose of Prayer
The Road to Camelot
The Sway of J-Z's Ego
The Traditions of the Best English Poets
The Usefulness of Attachment to Jesus
the wages of age
There is a Saxon Church
There is Within Your Eyes
This Body
Through a Glass Brightly
Time the Devourer
Tintagel
Touch
Towards Cadbury
truth
unremembered
want
Wasting Time Writing Complaining "Poetry"
We Stood Outside
We Toured the Autumned Cotswold Lanes
What I didn't do
What I Want
What I'd give
What Is It That You Want?
What Shall I Do?
what to pray
What Would Be Done?
Where are we headed to?
White Christmas?
Whose Bodies
Why Remorse?
Will I sigh?
With apologies to Anacreon
Within Our Nested Dark
Within Your Eyes
worship
Wrinkles
Yeas Ago
Yesterday
You asked
you away
You Did not Know It Then
You Ought to Know
You Thief!
your desire
Your Eyes
Your Fingers
Your Master
Your Name
Your Searching Touch
Your Touch
Your Words
But I find your request that I should write on subjects other that on "beds and what follows", ironic given (1) that it comes from from someone who posts, notably over and over again in the same style and with the same limited range of words, on a very limited number of topics and (2) that the number of reads my "bed" pieces get, (not to mention that others here who are not sycophants like, sometimes revel in, and wish to see more of my dwelling on "beds and what follows", my supposed "infatuation" with this subject is regarded by anyone but prudish you as "unfortunate".
I also find your claim that I don't write about anything other than "beds and what follows" is amusingly false. As the following list of my submissions shows shows, it is, as are the claims you make in your submissions) miserably uninformed.
10th Month
A Challenge to J-Z
A Challenge to J-Z -- and anyone else here who might find it fun to imitate Byron, Yeats, et. al.
A Ditty for Pharaoh
A Ditty on The Wages of Cheating
A Kind of Sonnet
A memory from long ago of Lee
A memory of GF
A Pilgrim to the Trove of You
A poem for you
A Renewed Challenge to J-Z
A Riff on Catullus
A Steven-esque
A summoning
absence
Absent Friends
Abused
Adam
After the Annunciation
After Thomas Hardy's Oxen
afterlife?
Aftermath
age
Age
Aging
Ah Gabriel
All This to Have
An Alexandrine Challenge
An Emulation of Thomas Wyatt's "And Leave Not Yet"
An Etheree
Angels' Song
Annunciation
Another about Gilly
Another Ditty
Another for Anne-C
another kiss
another on J-Z
approaching another birthday
As He Lay Dying
As I decorate my Christmas tree
Ash Wednesday
At First Sight
At Glastonbury
At Night
Augustine's Mistake
Autumn Emptiness
Autumn in Sherwood
awe
Ballerina
Be Gone!
Because of you
Before
Belly Dancer
Cathedrals
Chastity
Christmas Tide
Circe
Come Dance With Me
Culprit Moon
Damn you, Woman
Derbyed Men
distance
Ditty
Do Not Come With Me
Does death deprive?
Does God Care for Ghosts?
Dreams
Dreams
Ekphrasis
Eliot
Esker's Crest
explorer
eyes
Farmer and his gun
Fire eyes
Fog
For Anne-C
For J-Z
For Summer
Giotto's Angel
Give Me Now your Kiss
Gladiators
God
God Help Me Now
God is not Good: Bad Theology
God's Loaves
Golgatha
Golgatha
Grey Wing
Growing Old
Ha Satan
Healing
her crotch
Her Hands
Her laugh
Here
Here's What Comes from Remembering the Past
Hey Joseph-Z
him?
His Cold Fish (for J-Z who won't answer the question of whether he's been desired by women)
How Can I Make you Believe?
How I Wish It Were So
How Many Times?
How will you know
I am religious
I Cannot Understand This Thing Called Soul
I Dreamed a Dream
I Often Sit for Hours
I remember
I Shall Not Share
I Shall Place My Palms
I shall pretend
I want your mouth
I Will Kiss You With My Voice
I wonder
I'll Not be Obedient to Life
If I could be there
If I should craft new lullabies for you
If I should craft some lullabies for you
If You Wish It So
In Emulation of Ovid
In the Brightest of My Rooms
In Want of Words
Incarnation
Indecency
Indolence
J-Z and his "If"
Jealousy
Jesus Cannot Take my Loneliness Away
Jesus' love
Joseph's claims
Joseph's criterion for what makes a poem "great"
Joseph's Response
kiss
Kiss
Kiss Me Now
La Belle Dame sans Merci
Laura
Lazarus
Lies
light
lines
little bastard
Loneliness is a Fish
Longing
Manna from heaven
Mary
Memorial Day
Mitigation
Mortality
Mother Mary
Moths to Flame
My heart
My Heart and Song
My hope for J-Z
My new cat
My pissed off Muse
My Ram
My Skin is Taught
Nativity
night
No Ambiguity
No Jewels
Nostalgia
Not Soon Enough
not voiced
November's Trees
Odysseus the Liar
Oedipus at Thebes
Old Simeon
On J-Z's "From Hands to Hands"
On Yoolis Night
One God?
pale moon
Parts and Wholes
poetical idea
Pope's Complaint
Quit Telling Me that Heaven Is My Home
Ravages
Regret
remember, body
Restraint
September Now
Sheryl
Should We Love What the Braggart Writes
Sin?
Song
Stage Fright
stages
Subservience?
Sunrise Disturbed
surprised
That isn't proof
The Arrogance and Stupidity of Patriarchy
The Bene Elohim at Christmas
The Claim
The Cygnet
The Damning Present
The fallacy known as poisoning the well
The Glisten Gray
The Intent of Mary's Words to Me
the narcissist J-Z!
the power
the power of the vagina
The Purpose of Prayer
The Road to Camelot
The Sway of J-Z's Ego
The Traditions of the Best English Poets
The Usefulness of Attachment to Jesus
the wages of age
There is a Saxon Church
There is Within Your Eyes
This Body
Through a Glass Brightly
Time the Devourer
Tintagel
Touch
Towards Cadbury
truth
unremembered
want
Wasting Time Writing Complaining "Poetry"
We Stood Outside
We Toured the Autumned Cotswold Lanes
What I didn't do
What I Want
What I'd give
What Is It That You Want?
What Shall I Do?
what to pray
What Would Be Done?
Where are we headed to?
White Christmas?
Whose Bodies
Why Remorse?
Will I sigh?
With apologies to Anacreon
Within Our Nested Dark
Within Your Eyes
worship
Wrinkles
Yeas Ago
Yesterday
You asked
you away
You Did not Know It Then
You Ought to Know
You Thief!
your desire
Your Eyes
Your Fingers
Your Master
Your Name
Your Searching Touch
Your Touch
Your Words