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It was love at first sight
Between her and
Her daughter's husband.
Hot and torrid.
Nobody questionned that
A year later the daughter died
Of severe pneumonia.
True, she also swallowed pills
Like candies,
That did not help.
But her death was dertmined to be natural.
What is even more strange
Is that some years later
The husband-lover also died
Of complications due to
Pneumonia.
Some spoke of poison
But no proof.
Weird.
Did she kill both,
Her daughter so she could
Have the husband to herself?
But the husband-lover?
Did she also kill him....and why?
Between her and
Her daughter's husband.
Hot and torrid.
Nobody questionned that
A year later the daughter died
Of severe pneumonia.
True, she also swallowed pills
Like candies,
That did not help.
But her death was dertmined to be natural.
What is even more strange
Is that some years later
The husband-lover also died
Of complications due to
Pneumonia.
Some spoke of poison
But no proof.
Weird.
Did she kill both,
Her daughter so she could
Have the husband to herself?
But the husband-lover?
Did she also kill him....and why?
Published 5th Mar 2022
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5th Mar 2022 8:18pm
5th Mar 2022 8:34pm
Ya. That is also based on true events which happened years ago. Possibly the making of a short story here. Regards, Robert.
5th Mar 2022 9:42pm
5th Mar 2022 10:58pm
Sherlock will investigate and find the answer! A great and new approach. XO
5th Mar 2022 11:03pm
5th Mar 2022 11:16pm
6th Mar 2022 00:23am
Actually, there is a type of chemical pneumonia, which is likely what happened with both the daughter and the husband-lover could have died of this. It happens when there is inflammation of the lungs due to poison toxin.....
8th Mar 2022 1:10pm
There's a bit of karma maybe working here, too perhaps?.... Just maybe.
Your story is chilling and quite the tale, indeed.
Nicely penned, dear sir.
🌹 - B
Your story is chilling and quite the tale, indeed.
Nicely penned, dear sir.
🌹 - B
8th Mar 2022 1:22pm
Thanks, dear. And nice of you to visit. Haven't heard from you in a while. Everything ok with you? Kisses, Robert.
Likewise, Robert! ... I have been busy working. Yes, all is well...nothing truly exciting. The Tampa Bay Lightning are kicking much ass, that's been about as much excitement as I've personally had... lmao!! 🏒 hahaha. I've been trying to reconcile the sad sad state of the world, with recent events. Sigh... such terrible sadness there....in Ukraine 🇺🇦. I send out my best wishes to those people, every single day.
I've been reading your work and trying to keep up... time slips away, you know... I'm sure you know!
Thanks for the lovely response. Hope you are doing well, too and that Spring is on it's way to you. 🌺🌹🥀🏵️🌸🌸🌷🌼🌱
🌹 - 💙
—B
I've been reading your work and trying to keep up... time slips away, you know... I'm sure you know!
Thanks for the lovely response. Hope you are doing well, too and that Spring is on it's way to you. 🌺🌹🥀🏵️🌸🌸🌷🌼🌱
🌹 - 💙
—B
15th Mar 2022 4:25pm
That certainly raises a lot of questions, mainly, did the husband do it too out of guilt?
Intriguing write robert.
Intriguing write robert.
15th Mar 2022 5:03pm
