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In Revelation
I once conceived of the notion
of the mind as a manorial, or -
a castle, on a promontory, jutting
into jagged seas of storms –
& seas of tranquility. Inside of this
structure were chambers and
hallways. I imagined that
each piece of poetry became
a painting, framed by space -
adorning the walls of this
place. And that which was
yet unwritten, remained
in an empty frame, pulsating
with the primal energies
of potential and possibility,
awaiting the revelation.
Then one day I discovered a
chamber that I was unaware
of, exquisitely architected in
some, other worldly design:
Burst fireplace
In
Fluctuations,
A
Tome
On a
Table
Frames
Of
Space
Pulsating sable
&
I am able
To
Begin
To
See you
&
Read you
In
Revelation.
Published 4th Mar 2022
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4th Mar 2022 8:19am
I guess writing must have been theme of the day. I’ve also published on similar themes this morning and read a few others so I guess it’s theme of the day.
This idea of halls of poetry — of thoughts, and memories, and pages cascading is very powerful. Sometimes I think that about DU, Y’know… at what stage do our thoughts become gallery to onlookers? It’s both intimidating and soothing.
Thank you for your thoughts here, they were both insightful and well articulated.
-M
This idea of halls of poetry — of thoughts, and memories, and pages cascading is very powerful. Sometimes I think that about DU, Y’know… at what stage do our thoughts become gallery to onlookers? It’s both intimidating and soothing.
Thank you for your thoughts here, they were both insightful and well articulated.
-M
5th Mar 2022 7:33am
Thank you Missy.
I also think about DU.
I find it interesting how structures
of consciousness interact with consciousness...
Like how they become
compelling forces, amongst other things...
I very much like and appreciate your cool perspective
and insight.
Tis thought provoking.
(I am reminded of these
studies done by the Stanford Research Institute)
I also think about DU.
I find it interesting how structures
of consciousness interact with consciousness...
Like how they become
compelling forces, amongst other things...
I very much like and appreciate your cool perspective
and insight.
Tis thought provoking.
(I am reminded of these
studies done by the Stanford Research Institute)
4th Mar 2022 2:06pm
dearest Cipher I have a rule for myself when it comes to writing poetry
I write even when the idea makes no sense to me, I write even when it sounds kooky, I write even when I deem it not good enough a thought or when it paints me in a bad light... I write because as you pointed the universe is pulsing with messages waiting to be written... this is one of you best in my opinion...
I write even when the idea makes no sense to me, I write even when it sounds kooky, I write even when I deem it not good enough a thought or when it paints me in a bad light... I write because as you pointed the universe is pulsing with messages waiting to be written... this is one of you best in my opinion...
5th Mar 2022 7:37am
Aww...
Thank you so much for sharing
this with me, Crimsin.
I was just reading this thing
on Miles Davis...
And they talked about him
being great because:
"He was never afraid to take risks."
I feel like I can see that
and hear that, in your work...
And it inspires me much muchly.
:)))
Thank you so much for sharing
this with me, Crimsin.
I was just reading this thing
on Miles Davis...
And they talked about him
being great because:
"He was never afraid to take risks."
I feel like I can see that
and hear that, in your work...
And it inspires me much muchly.
:)))
