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Dinking My Cosmo
Hear my diamond dripping rings
Click-ity-clink against my drink
Waving signaling to the waitress
Needing a decompress of all of my stress
Drink sip-ity drink
Sipping my Cosmo
Heading toward dance floor
Bartendy charge two more for me
Start a tab compliments of the CEO
I’m forgetting it all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Opal flowers growing
Curving around my halo
Friday night and I’m soaring
Stretching my wings
Through Saturday morning
Mirrored ceilings
Smokescreens
Shotgun breathing
Panoramic hydroponic
Sea of steam
All around me
Sip drink-ity sip
Drinking my Cosmo
Dancing on the dance floor
Styling in my golden stilettos
Bought with compliments of the CEO
I’m his favorite after all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Click-ity-clink against my drink
Waving signaling to the waitress
Needing a decompress of all of my stress
Drink sip-ity drink
Sipping my Cosmo
Heading toward dance floor
Bartendy charge two more for me
Start a tab compliments of the CEO
I’m forgetting it all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Opal flowers growing
Curving around my halo
Friday night and I’m soaring
Stretching my wings
Through Saturday morning
Mirrored ceilings
Smokescreens
Shotgun breathing
Panoramic hydroponic
Sea of steam
All around me
Sip drink-ity sip
Drinking my Cosmo
Dancing on the dance floor
Styling in my golden stilettos
Bought with compliments of the CEO
I’m his favorite after all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Published 26th Feb 2022
| Edited 28th Feb 2022
Author's Note
I was watching Inventing Anna on Netflix and this song came on.
I got that spark. My heart skipped and off I went.
Song by Cyn - Drinks
I got that spark. My heart skipped and off I went.
Song by Cyn - Drinks
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26th Feb 2022 8:00pm
26th Feb 2022 8:06pm
Hey LilD:)
Thanks, so glad you enjoyed.
Just felt it growing inside:)
I'm enjoying that bangin' view amiga!!!
Thanks, so glad you enjoyed.
Just felt it growing inside:)
I'm enjoying that bangin' view amiga!!!
26th Feb 2022 8:09pm
26th Feb 2022 8:12pm
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Feb 2022 8:19pm
26th Feb 2022 8:16pm
I haven't seen the poem but the show is great! Wait...I mean, the other way around. (I have been Sip drink-ity sip -ing my own cocktails this morning on account of mardi gras and things 😅)
This is a nice, tight poem, with flow and narrative, and snap, snap-ity finger snappiness. I Rolled sublimely right through the reading of it, and even found myself resentfully jealous of that damn CEO! And, I wanted to be the narrator ☺️
Well crafted! This poem told a story and really entertained , which , hopefully were parts of its point. ...There was Glitz, and She was on a Dance floor, even...🌸
This is a nice, tight poem, with flow and narrative, and snap, snap-ity finger snappiness. I Rolled sublimely right through the reading of it, and even found myself resentfully jealous of that damn CEO! And, I wanted to be the narrator ☺️
Well crafted! This poem told a story and really entertained , which , hopefully were parts of its point. ...There was Glitz, and She was on a Dance floor, even...🌸
26th Feb 2022 8:27pm
Hahahaha. Awesome comment chica!!!
I'm totally that girl who likes to go out and party.
Not too much but yeah. I still like to go out and have
a good time. Nothing that will put me in jail. That was in
my twenties. LOL Too old for that nowadays. hehehe
Love all the glam and glitz of life. Can't imagine life without it!!!
Have a wonderful weekend!!!!
I'm totally that girl who likes to go out and party.
Not too much but yeah. I still like to go out and have
a good time. Nothing that will put me in jail. That was in
my twenties. LOL Too old for that nowadays. hehehe
Love all the glam and glitz of life. Can't imagine life without it!!!
Have a wonderful weekend!!!!
26th Feb 2022 8:40pm
Great poem Adel 😁
Lovely and delightfully light.
I've seen that film advertised, haven't gotten around to watching it yet.
Your poem will make it all the more pleasurable now when I watch it.
You wearing stilettos wont be doing my blood pressure any good now either 😂
Loving your poem Adel
💜💜💜🙏🙏🙏
Lovely and delightfully light.
I've seen that film advertised, haven't gotten around to watching it yet.
Your poem will make it all the more pleasurable now when I watch it.
You wearing stilettos wont be doing my blood pressure any good now either 😂
Loving your poem Adel
💜💜💜🙏🙏🙏
26th Feb 2022 8:47pm
Oh - I'm not just wearing amigo, I'm dancing my ass off. hahahah
Too funny!!
Thanks for checking this out and giving me your comments.
The song doesn't come out further down in the series.
Great to hear from you Whyme!!!
Have a great weekend amigo.
Buy your woman a new pair of shoes. heheheh
Too funny!!
Thanks for checking this out and giving me your comments.
The song doesn't come out further down in the series.
Great to hear from you Whyme!!!
Have a great weekend amigo.
Buy your woman a new pair of shoes. heheheh
Lmao 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I did 😂😂😂
Buy her shoes 😂😂😂😂😂
Asics 🤣🤣🤣🤣
You too have a wonderful weekend,
AND please be careful dancing in those stilettos. They kill me every time I wear them 😂😂👠👠👠
I'll leave you with this link to a song, you made me remember some good times I've had when I was a puppy 😊
https://youtu.be/4kOs0dGZH04
Hope you like it
I did 😂😂😂
Buy her shoes 😂😂😂😂😂
Asics 🤣🤣🤣🤣
You too have a wonderful weekend,
AND please be careful dancing in those stilettos. They kill me every time I wear them 😂😂👠👠👠
I'll leave you with this link to a song, you made me remember some good times I've had when I was a puppy 😊
https://youtu.be/4kOs0dGZH04
Hope you like it
28th Feb 2022 3:21am
I love that song!!
"I never seen you shine so bright - huuummm"
Great song Whyme!!!
Thanks for sharing amigo.
"I never seen you shine so bright - huuummm"
Great song Whyme!!!
Thanks for sharing amigo.
28th Feb 2022 7:34am
😂
Thanks for listening to it... I love all of his music. God, it brings back glorious memories
80's forever 😂🎶🎶🎶
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
Thanks for listening to it... I love all of his music. God, it brings back glorious memories
80's forever 😂🎶🎶🎶
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
26th Feb 2022 8:48pm
26th Feb 2022 8:51pm
26th Feb 2022 8:56pm
To be honest we actually looked this drink up after reading this piece. Now thar should tell you how much we liked the piece, super tight
26th Feb 2022 9:00pm
Hey mister!!!
So glad you enjoyed this piece and the song. Some things just
give you that shot of adrenaline. Gotta just follow and go with it.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
So glad to see you stop by and leave a comment.
Salud!!
So glad you enjoyed this piece and the song. Some things just
give you that shot of adrenaline. Gotta just follow and go with it.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
So glad to see you stop by and leave a comment.
Salud!!
26th Feb 2022 10:10pm
HA!
Hey AMIGO. hehehehe
Glad you enjoyed my little party. LOL
Salud from Texas!!
Hey AMIGO. hehehehe
Glad you enjoyed my little party. LOL
Salud from Texas!!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
26th Feb 2022 10:12pm
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26th Feb 2022 10:27pm
Hehehehe.
Well yeah, guilty. LOL
You gotta join me on the other chandelier.
We'll be the Flying Cosmos - doing trapeze acts.
I'll wear my stilettos. ha!!
Thanks for stopping by for a comment Buddy:)
Well yeah, guilty. LOL
You gotta join me on the other chandelier.
We'll be the Flying Cosmos - doing trapeze acts.
I'll wear my stilettos. ha!!
Thanks for stopping by for a comment Buddy:)
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
26th Feb 2022 10:28pm
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27th Feb 2022 3:35am
Dear A,
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💍
Quit cribbing’ my space! I need a lot of room on the dance floor to exhibit my inner 70’s disco dancing queen!
Please tell me your CEO wears a toupee! Good times. Great vibe throughout this write! H🌷
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🍸
💍
Quit cribbing’ my space! I need a lot of room on the dance floor to exhibit my inner 70’s disco dancing queen!
Please tell me your CEO wears a toupee! Good times. Great vibe throughout this write! H🌷
28th Feb 2022 2:15am
Hi H!!!
Hahahah:)
Disco Queens you mean. You and I !!
I hadn't written s song in a while so I thought I'd
write one. LOL
No toupee for the CEO.
He is way too cool for that. hahaha
But he is sporting amazing bell bottoms
with a Rolex. heheheh
Thanks for stopping by amiga!!
Hahahah:)
Disco Queens you mean. You and I !!
I hadn't written s song in a while so I thought I'd
write one. LOL
No toupee for the CEO.
He is way too cool for that. hahaha
But he is sporting amazing bell bottoms
with a Rolex. heheheh
Thanks for stopping by amiga!!
