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Girl Crush
my college friend Lou
has a girl crush on me
the reciprocation
causes discord in my brain
two radio stations playing at once
I turn the lezzy one down
glance around
hope no one knows i was listening
Lou is beautiful
like a renaissance woman
benevolently powerful
dominant
(a word I won't understand until later)
i had a dream last night
she tells me
i took your hand
and lifted you into the sky
and we flew together
over the city
i picture it
my heart soars
through nebulous filters
i know exactly what she means
she's just a friend
i tell myself
she's just a friend
forty years later
i'd like to find her
has a girl crush on me
the reciprocation
causes discord in my brain
two radio stations playing at once
I turn the lezzy one down
glance around
hope no one knows i was listening
Lou is beautiful
like a renaissance woman
benevolently powerful
dominant
(a word I won't understand until later)
i had a dream last night
she tells me
i took your hand
and lifted you into the sky
and we flew together
over the city
i picture it
my heart soars
through nebulous filters
i know exactly what she means
she's just a friend
i tell myself
she's just a friend
forty years later
i'd like to find her
Published 18th Feb 2022
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18th Feb 2022 8:30am
Seize the moment, the times I've chosen the wrong path are numerous
Opportunities passed by. I hope you get another chance
Love this heartfelt piece
Love and light
Ron xx
Opportunities passed by. I hope you get another chance
Love this heartfelt piece
Love and light
Ron xx
19th Feb 2022 1:59am
Hey there Pd,
I may not have communicated to you on every poem you've written, but I absolutely read each piece of writing you've shared here on DUP, I'm a total fan and deeply enjoy your style/ form of expression. The uniquely honest and refreshing place you write from is utterly engaging, almost always hitting a nerve and some of the best work I've read in awhile. No bullshit, it really is.
I felt the need to really make you aware of just how much I love, appreciate and revere your work and how grateful I am that you continue to share your talents with us 🙏🏻
This piece really made an amazingly poignant impact. Killer poeting, Pink!
Keep at it, (please!) ... lol ;)
Be well and be safe out there 💙
🌹-B
x
I may not have communicated to you on every poem you've written, but I absolutely read each piece of writing you've shared here on DUP, I'm a total fan and deeply enjoy your style/ form of expression. The uniquely honest and refreshing place you write from is utterly engaging, almost always hitting a nerve and some of the best work I've read in awhile. No bullshit, it really is.
I felt the need to really make you aware of just how much I love, appreciate and revere your work and how grateful I am that you continue to share your talents with us 🙏🏻
This piece really made an amazingly poignant impact. Killer poeting, Pink!
Keep at it, (please!) ... lol ;)
Be well and be safe out there 💙
🌹-B
x
19th Feb 2022 2:01am
As I'm in awe of your poetry, your compliments mean a great deal to me. Thank you so much. You made my day.
18th Feb 2022 2:11pm
Yes, there is someone we would like to find after all the years. Great reminder. Hugs and peace, Oral
19th Feb 2022 2:01am
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18th Feb 2022 10:14pm
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19th Feb 2022 2:03am
She had an usual last name. Haven't been able to find her, but maybe tomorrow I will.
