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Softly Kissing In The Rain
Two naked bodies housing gratified ecstasy
Hoping, wishing...
To once again soar to Heaven when he laid me down on a bed of silken rose petals and made such sweet love to me
The flowing desires for which to measure the state of our physical existence caught up in the strangulation of time
Hoping, wishing...
To once again soar to Heaven when he laid me down on a bed of silken rose petals and made such sweet love to me
The flowing desires for which to measure the state of our physical existence caught up in the strangulation of time
Published 10th Feb 2022
| Edited 29th Aug 2024
Author's Note
The beauty of a woman is not in a facial mode but the true beauty in a woman is reflected in her soul. It is the caring that she lovingly gives the passion that she shows. The beauty of a woman grows with the passing years.
Audrey Hepburn
Audrey Hepburn
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11th Feb 2022 00:13am
11th Feb 2022 2:55am
Well now, I will take that sweet breeze of words any day my friend, and thank you with all sincerity for taking the time to read and the va va voommmmm comment
On that zooming note, please enjoy your last evening and have a supercharged Friday
On that zooming note, please enjoy your last evening and have a supercharged Friday
11th Feb 2022 00:40am
You are setting me on fire. Kissing in the rain leads to hot sex in the rain. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
11th Feb 2022 3:24am
Thank you so much my handsome poet for taking the required time to read and then adding a sizzling comment...
I am wishing you nothing but a pleasant evening and an awesome Friday...
I am wishing you nothing but a pleasant evening and an awesome Friday...
11th Feb 2022 6:41am
I will enjoy my Friday. You also enjoy your Friday and stay safe out there.
11th Feb 2022 8:50pm
11th Feb 2022 11:35am
Tender compliance never sounded so sexy. This write appears to suggest she was ripe for the taking. ;)
11th Feb 2022 8:41pm
Your embracing comment, which is always tenderly felt has left me speechless... and in total awe of the emotions behind the accolade...very smooth, my love
Thank you, my tender poet, for the read, and dancing in the limelight of such enticing words to mentally submerge
Enjoy your evening as you head into a great weekend...
Thank you, my tender poet, for the read, and dancing in the limelight of such enticing words to mentally submerge
Enjoy your evening as you head into a great weekend...
12th Feb 2022 1:23pm
And I know I'm not the only one who dances in the rain
I hear it like the thunder
Music in my brain
It's got me going dancing in the moonlight, tonight, again, again
I'm not the only one who dances is the rain
The only one who dances in the rain
- lyrics by Meghan Trainor
I hear it like the thunder
Music in my brain
It's got me going dancing in the moonlight, tonight, again, again
I'm not the only one who dances is the rain
The only one who dances in the rain
- lyrics by Meghan Trainor
15th Feb 2022 11:31pm
I am so sorry for the late response my wandering poet.. I am just now seeing this beautiful rendition of giving credence to one of my favorite elements and that is the rain...
I do admire your perspective, very much so
Thank you for reading, in as much for a cosmic comment
I hope your day was productive as the evening sets sin. Have a great Wednesday as well
I do admire your perspective, very much so
Thank you for reading, in as much for a cosmic comment
I hope your day was productive as the evening sets sin. Have a great Wednesday as well
