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MAY I KNEAD IT?
SOFTNESS
In its original
state it is soft
and has within it
promises of amazing
results when
properly kneaded
by caring and loving
hands.
A soft stretching,
manipulating, gentle
massaging, pulling,
thoughtful pauses
and daring experiments.
Molding a clay piece
of artwork is a challenging
endeavor. Meet me
at the kissing place
and we'll knead together.
In its original
state it is soft
and has within it
promises of amazing
results when
properly kneaded
by caring and loving
hands.
A soft stretching,
manipulating, gentle
massaging, pulling,
thoughtful pauses
and daring experiments.
Molding a clay piece
of artwork is a challenging
endeavor. Meet me
at the kissing place
and we'll knead together.
Published 29th Jan 2022
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29th Jan 2022 2:31pm
It's nice to be kneaded
Sorry poor word play but hey I'm not great with words lol
Love it
Ron
Sorry poor word play but hey I'm not great with words lol
Love it
Ron
29th Jan 2022 2:34pm
Love "It's nice to be kneaded." Wish I had thought of that. Thanks and peace, Oral
29th Jan 2022 9:09pm
Whew! Had to catch my breath by the end of that. My next pastry chef needs to read your poem.
29th Jan 2022 11:02pm
