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Twisted Dreamer
Twisted Dreamer
People say time heals
Do they know how i feel
Do they know the agony inside
Eating away like an alien in Sigourney
Haunted by memories
Ghosts rampaging
"Who do you call"
Wishing I could call the ghost busters
There is no escaping
I am locked up within
My mind scream for parole
But there can be
No early release
For good behaviour
I've gotten a life sentence
You see
I was judged insane
Now all I've got
Is this new jacket
With all its lovely straps
And bright shiny buckles
People say time heals
Do they know how i feel
Do they know the agony inside
Eating away like an alien in Sigourney
Haunted by memories
Ghosts rampaging
"Who do you call"
Wishing I could call the ghost busters
There is no escaping
I am locked up within
My mind scream for parole
But there can be
No early release
For good behaviour
I've gotten a life sentence
You see
I was judged insane
Now all I've got
Is this new jacket
With all its lovely straps
And bright shiny buckles
Published 19th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Another fun piece of my demented mind :)
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19th Jan 2022 11:58pm
Super creative and totally tugs and my heartstrings with the inclusion of those nostalgic movie references.....
Really imaginative, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
-B
Really imaginative, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
-B
20th Jan 2022 00:15am
Smile,, hi Blue
Yes I had fun with this one. The first Aliens frightened the life out of me, brilliant film. And of course there can't be a ghost without a ghost Buster.
Thanks for your lovely comment and stopping by.
Love n peace
🙏💜💜💜
Yes I had fun with this one. The first Aliens frightened the life out of me, brilliant film. And of course there can't be a ghost without a ghost Buster.
Thanks for your lovely comment and stopping by.
Love n peace
🙏💜💜💜
20th Jan 2022 1:31am
I love the jumps in this.
From Sigourney in Aliens to Ghost Busters. She was in the first Ghost Busters too right?
Ha! Love how original this. A total Whyme original.
Keep on keeping on amigo!!
From Sigourney in Aliens to Ghost Busters. She was in the first Ghost Busters too right?
Ha! Love how original this. A total Whyme original.
Keep on keeping on amigo!!
20th Jan 2022 3:44am
Oooo forgot she was in ghost busters too,, that makes it weird :)
😊,, thanks for the miles of smiles A,
Love your comment,,, thanks a million
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
😊,, thanks for the miles of smiles A,
Love your comment,,, thanks a million
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
20th Jan 2022 5:09am
Dear W,
This a great write. I admit amidst the light hearted nature of this poem I found some wonderful phrases that I agreed with regarding the whole time healing thought process. The notion of not escaping haunted thoughts, no early release for good behavior, fantastic phrases I found to be so relatable. I really enjoyed the mirth mixed in with the seriousness of truth. Well done. H🌷
This a great write. I admit amidst the light hearted nature of this poem I found some wonderful phrases that I agreed with regarding the whole time healing thought process. The notion of not escaping haunted thoughts, no early release for good behavior, fantastic phrases I found to be so relatable. I really enjoyed the mirth mixed in with the seriousness of truth. Well done. H🌷
20th Jan 2022 8:39am
Hiya H
It's great to see you here, I love hearing from you and yes this is meant to be a little fun piece but you're right, there is a deeper vein running through it.
We all have our own Ghosts to deal with.
Those last couple of lines are straight out of me wanting that jacket that I can call my own strait away 😂😂😂
Thanks for your lovely comment, always appreciate your kind words
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏🤗
It's great to see you here, I love hearing from you and yes this is meant to be a little fun piece but you're right, there is a deeper vein running through it.
We all have our own Ghosts to deal with.
Those last couple of lines are straight out of me wanting that jacket that I can call my own strait away 😂😂😂
Thanks for your lovely comment, always appreciate your kind words
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏🤗
20th Jan 2022 9:24am
20th Jan 2022 9:45am
Hey C_O
Thanks a bunch for looking in, reading and commenting
Yes, some of my stuff has a deeper meaning to it, life is never simple or easy at least not for me anyway..
But it was fun to write, the last few lines I just had to get in there, I'm just waiting anxiously here for that new jacket 😂, can't wait to see how it'll fit, hopefully nice n snug😂😂😂😂
Thanks again C_O it's great to hear from you
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
Thanks a bunch for looking in, reading and commenting
Yes, some of my stuff has a deeper meaning to it, life is never simple or easy at least not for me anyway..
But it was fun to write, the last few lines I just had to get in there, I'm just waiting anxiously here for that new jacket 😂, can't wait to see how it'll fit, hopefully nice n snug😂😂😂😂
Thanks again C_O it's great to hear from you
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
20th Jan 2022 10:22am
20th Jan 2022 10:45am
Thank you O 😊
I will confess though, even if it has a mix of light and serious and a touch of Insanity, it came about after reading your poetry.
Hope you're well, thank you for commenting
Love n peace always
💜💜💜🙏🙏
I will confess though, even if it has a mix of light and serious and a touch of Insanity, it came about after reading your poetry.
Hope you're well, thank you for commenting
Love n peace always
💜💜💜🙏🙏
