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Hell Born
Forget the rosess,
I was born among the thorns
Forget the doves
I was raised by vultures
Forget sweet passion
I was fucked by the gods
I suckled on Satan's cock
Forget sweet dreams
I dwell within nightmares
I walk among the shadows
Forget sweet love
I am Lucifers collared pet
I was forged in the fires of hell
Brimstone is my fuel
I burn hot
But
I
Am
The
Snowball
In
Hell
(**Mise le meas a chara)
I was born among the thorns
Forget the doves
I was raised by vultures
Forget sweet passion
I was fucked by the gods
I suckled on Satan's cock
Forget sweet dreams
I dwell within nightmares
I walk among the shadows
Forget sweet love
I am Lucifers collared pet
I was forged in the fires of hell
Brimstone is my fuel
I burn hot
But
I
Am
The
Snowball
In
Hell
(**Mise le meas a chara)
Published 17th Jan 2022
Author's Note
This was inspired by comments on here, a person I'd like to call a friend led me unknowingly to this poem
Mise le meas a chara 😊😊
Mise le meas a chara 😊😊
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17th Jan 2022 2:52am
This is awesome!!
Love the empowerment of it.
Recognition of your self and not putting up a front.
We are what we are. No apologies:)
Well written amigo!!!
Love the empowerment of it.
Recognition of your self and not putting up a front.
We are what we are. No apologies:)
Well written amigo!!!
Hiya A
It's great to see you around, missed you much,
Thanks for your lovely comment.
This was truly a spur of the moment thing, it came about because of a comment I was replying to.
But I like dark and erotic, to be truly honest with you.
I lied a little, ( well maybe a lot ),,, I really wasn't raised by vultures, I didnt suck on you know who's cock either 🙄
Thank you so much for your support dear Lady
Thanks again A 😊😊
Love n peace
💜💜💜
Ps, I do love your name 😊
It's great to see you around, missed you much,
Thanks for your lovely comment.
This was truly a spur of the moment thing, it came about because of a comment I was replying to.
But I like dark and erotic, to be truly honest with you.
I lied a little, ( well maybe a lot ),,, I really wasn't raised by vultures, I didnt suck on you know who's cock either 🙄
Thank you so much for your support dear Lady
Thanks again A 😊😊
Love n peace
💜💜💜
Ps, I do love your name 😊
Hi there WM!
To be so inspired in the moment sometimes makes for the best creative juju!! Yesss!
I can definitely relate and revel in the terrifically effective feelings that you cleverly exude- - Acceptances and realizations that are colored beautifully dark and erotic within your gothic-like word choices and phasing. The creative license you take is my kind of fiction, indeed!! I adore a bit of shock value with an essence of truth running throughout, which is what I believe I feel when reading this little gem of yours ;)
Wonderfully penned ink!!
I was there- in kinship, dressed in my full gothgirl 'finest' cheering along each line!!!... lol...
Well done you -
🖤🥀🖤
—B
To be so inspired in the moment sometimes makes for the best creative juju!! Yesss!
I can definitely relate and revel in the terrifically effective feelings that you cleverly exude- - Acceptances and realizations that are colored beautifully dark and erotic within your gothic-like word choices and phasing. The creative license you take is my kind of fiction, indeed!! I adore a bit of shock value with an essence of truth running throughout, which is what I believe I feel when reading this little gem of yours ;)
Wonderfully penned ink!!
I was there- in kinship, dressed in my full gothgirl 'finest' cheering along each line!!!... lol...
Well done you -
🖤🥀🖤
—B
17th Jan 2022 7:09pm
Thank you dear Blue
Yea, I do like this one,, I had fun writing it, yes you are right about the gothic theme, would love to see in your best goth girl outfit 😊.
It was just reading another poem that this blazed into me. I am drawn to the "dark side" in most of my poems.
I am so glad you enjoyed this with me.
Thanks again for your support, it means a lot to me
Love n peace
💜💜💜
Yea, I do like this one,, I had fun writing it, yes you are right about the gothic theme, would love to see in your best goth girl outfit 😊.
It was just reading another poem that this blazed into me. I am drawn to the "dark side" in most of my poems.
I am so glad you enjoyed this with me.
Thanks again for your support, it means a lot to me
Love n peace
💜💜💜
Anonymous
19th Jan 2022 3:22am
Wow! Iconic, powerful and memorable!
19th Jan 2022 7:23am
Hi Pink
Thank you for stopping by, reading and leaving a comment.
Thank you for that lovely comment.
It's funny how things come about, I wrote this poem over something a friend wrote on here. Strange how we get inspired.
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
Thank you for stopping by, reading and leaving a comment.
Thank you for that lovely comment.
It's funny how things come about, I wrote this poem over something a friend wrote on here. Strange how we get inspired.
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜
14th Feb 2022 2:58pm
14th Feb 2022 4:25pm
Thank you kindly my Lady ☺️
It was fun to write, and I'm partial to the darker side of life
Your reading and comment is very welcome indeed
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
It was fun to write, and I'm partial to the darker side of life
Your reading and comment is very welcome indeed
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏
