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Black Magic Ballet
Published 12th Jan 2022
Author's Note
This one is about being in love/in a realtionship with someone you know will hurt you but you love them so you keep being with them anyways, I’m this instance it’s a narcissist who played and manipulated me,
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12th Jan 2022 5:30pm
Dear HL,
Intoxicating, these types of selfish relationships. Alluring and exciting until you wake up with the worst hangover ever. I’m sorry to read this as a personal experience of yours. Your poem is beautifully crafted describing how strong the pull can be and I really like your formatting. H🌷
Intoxicating, these types of selfish relationships. Alluring and exciting until you wake up with the worst hangover ever. I’m sorry to read this as a personal experience of yours. Your poem is beautifully crafted describing how strong the pull can be and I really like your formatting. H🌷
12th Jan 2022 5:32pm
Thank you and yes it’s a very painful relationship to be in and very hard to get over.
14th Jan 2022 8:26am
Wonderful imagery, cadence, structure, and presentation.
I thoroughly enjoyed the gothic essence of this piece.
Ending sublime.
I thoroughly enjoyed the gothic essence of this piece.
Ending sublime.
