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I Hate You
Sometimes all I see is you
Then I see red not blue
You hold my attention like a kitten to a string
And then I can’t think about anything
So all I want to say
When you make me feel this way
I get the feeling
That I hate you
Then I see red not blue
You hold my attention like a kitten to a string
And then I can’t think about anything
So all I want to say
When you make me feel this way
I get the feeling
That I hate you
Published 7th Mar 2012
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2nd Apr 2012 8:53pm
Is it red that you really see
And not the hue of dark
No color just absence of light
That forms around your heart
Hate for all that person is
Or in fact all colored red
Is it anger that holds you
And stops you from going to bed?
And not the hue of dark
No color just absence of light
That forms around your heart
Hate for all that person is
Or in fact all colored red
Is it anger that holds you
And stops you from going to bed?
3rd Apr 2012 3:45am
Thank you for the lines, I wrote this poem a long time ago and it was not my best.
3rd Apr 2012 4:12am
Welcome to the club! Being human, we are all allowed to write stuff that may not be our best. Plus if you are writing it here only, no paper is even wasted!
3rd Apr 2012 4:13am
Yeah, But I used to write on paper I have 3 books fillled with poems, although not all of the are the greatest they are still Ok i suppose
