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Jumping off Bridges
The water is high
but not high enough
i look down on the water
the fear disappears
I jump
4 seconds in the air
the water gets closer
the murky water calls as i near
i obey her
then its cold
the water envelops me
for a split second everything is black
finally I surface
I clammer onto the bank
What a rush!
but not high enough
i look down on the water
the fear disappears
I jump
4 seconds in the air
the water gets closer
the murky water calls as i near
i obey her
then its cold
the water envelops me
for a split second everything is black
finally I surface
I clammer onto the bank
What a rush!
Published 8th Mar 2012
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8th Mar 2012 4:56am
8th Mar 2012 5:06am
It's an amazing adrenaline rush... us midwest kids think swimming is a necessity not a skill
11th Mar 2012 11:11pm
Your poem felt good,I mean I'm here in the sunshine state of Florida where the heat is awful!your poem was pleasant and refreshing.ahhhhGotta love the rush!
12th Mar 2012 3:53am
