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Motion Sickness
She watches the world
spin quickly past her
it seems to go faster
every time she blinks.
Will it end if she never opens
her eyes again?
Only for her.
spin quickly past her
it seems to go faster
every time she blinks.
Will it end if she never opens
her eyes again?
Only for her.
Published 18th Dec 2021
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18th Dec 2021 11:45pm
19th Dec 2021 9:21am
Dear N,
In answer to the question at the end of this poem, selfishly I wish it would. I’m tired. But I sure do admire this poem. I love how your quick wit parlay’s into genius writes. H🌷
In answer to the question at the end of this poem, selfishly I wish it would. I’m tired. But I sure do admire this poem. I love how your quick wit parlay’s into genius writes. H🌷
22nd Dec 2021 5:45am
The refresh on your consciousness must be tapped soooo deep in your subspace
30th Dec 2021 7:35pm
Like immortality, the mind travels at a different speed.
Love the photo, your portfolio always has great intriguing work.
Love the photo, your portfolio always has great intriguing work.
