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Boom
This is for
The girls with
The waxed
Golden skin
Who make
My heart
Slam ba bam
Ba bam boom
Who me
No you
Sun kissed luscious
Kisses kissing
Tides are moaning
Jasmine scented ocean
Mid drift rolling
Color of cinnamon
Your private beach
Within your hands
Your candy land
This is for
The guys who
Drive the
Fast cars
Who make
My heart
Slam za zam
Za zam zoom
Yeah me
That's who
T-Tops down hair
Whipping around
Six gear stick shift
Let's keep the drift
I'm hopping over
Space is tight
Backroad tonight
Driving undercover
Not pulling over
Make my heart go
Zam za za zam
Ba bam ba bam
Boom
The girls with
The waxed
Golden skin
Who make
My heart
Slam ba bam
Ba bam boom
Who me
No you
Sun kissed luscious
Kisses kissing
Tides are moaning
Jasmine scented ocean
Mid drift rolling
Color of cinnamon
Your private beach
Within your hands
Your candy land
This is for
The guys who
Drive the
Fast cars
Who make
My heart
Slam za zam
Za zam zoom
Yeah me
That's who
T-Tops down hair
Whipping around
Six gear stick shift
Let's keep the drift
I'm hopping over
Space is tight
Backroad tonight
Driving undercover
Not pulling over
Make my heart go
Zam za za zam
Ba bam ba bam
Boom
Published 16th Dec 2021
Author's Note
Hahahah.
What it was like to be in my twenties and fearless!!
Wanted to try my own ba bam ba bam boom kinda thing. LOL
Also for all of you erotic writers out in DUP.
Yes I read but most of the time I am too speechless to leave a comment:
Inspired by the song by Metric - Monster Hospital
Made a correction- not garage. LOL
Should not post at night!!
What it was like to be in my twenties and fearless!!
Wanted to try my own ba bam ba bam boom kinda thing. LOL
Also for all of you erotic writers out in DUP.
Yes I read but most of the time I am too speechless to leave a comment:
Inspired by the song by Metric - Monster Hospital
Made a correction- not garage. LOL
Should not post at night!!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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16th Dec 2021 7:13am
Dear A,
How do you hear the orchestration to this poem? Bass, guitar and vocals?
I admire that you were fearless in your twenties. I wish I had been. Now I fear little bit too sore and crotchety to do anything dare devilish. H🌷
How do you hear the orchestration to this poem? Bass, guitar and vocals?
I admire that you were fearless in your twenties. I wish I had been. Now I fear little bit too sore and crotchety to do anything dare devilish. H🌷
Hi H!!!
I was on the pep squad in middle school.
Remember in the stadium.
stomp clap stomp stomp clap
Kinda like that.
Also like the intro to Monster Hospital from Metric.
In my head kinda blended it. LOL
You are fearless!!
And an amazing writer:)
Thanks for stopping by Honoria and commenting:)
I was on the pep squad in middle school.
Remember in the stadium.
stomp clap stomp stomp clap
Kinda like that.
Also like the intro to Monster Hospital from Metric.
In my head kinda blended it. LOL
You are fearless!!
And an amazing writer:)
Thanks for stopping by Honoria and commenting:)
16th Dec 2021 10:50pm
16th Dec 2021 10:57pm
17th Dec 2021 12:13pm
18th Dec 2021 2:21am
Hahaha.
Hey PS!!!
There is some hidden innuendo in the car driving
stanza amigo. heheheh
Thanks for the RL and the visit.
Hey PS!!!
There is some hidden innuendo in the car driving
stanza amigo. heheheh
Thanks for the RL and the visit.
18th Dec 2021 2:24am
I had a vintage `65 red Mustang Convertible back in the day.
Almost flipped that thing a dozen times
Lived to tell somehow
Yo
Almost flipped that thing a dozen times
Lived to tell somehow
Yo
18th Dec 2021 2:44am
Well thank god!!
Then there would be no art:(
Glad you made it out alive amigo!
My dad had a 67 or 68 Camaro back in the day.
He sold it when I was born to get a family car.
I wish he would have kept it.
Then there would be no art:(
Glad you made it out alive amigo!
My dad had a 67 or 68 Camaro back in the day.
He sold it when I was born to get a family car.
I wish he would have kept it.
18th Dec 2021 2:46am
18th Dec 2021 3:05am
eeewwwhhh.
Can't think of my dad in that way. LOL
Not going to lie though.
He was quite the eye heart throb back then.
Can't think of my dad in that way. LOL
Not going to lie though.
He was quite the eye heart throb back then.
17th Dec 2021 4:38pm
Oh the twenties! wait, I am still in my twenties. :p I love this Adelphina, it's so fun to read... You really had me smiling big with the Slam ba bam Ba bam boom 'Who me, No you' Slam za zam Za zam zoom 'Yeah me, That's who'. Your writing is just wonderful, I love your style - it's an experience. You really know how to pull the reader in.
18th Dec 2021 2:30am
Hi K!!
Thanks you so much for the visit:) So glad you enjoyed this.
Been so busy with work and wanted to just do something fun
and I love those anthem songs. I was in the pep squad in school so
I remember the whole - stomp clap stomp stomp clap thing. LOL
Kinda like a cheer in my head except wouldn't have repeated this poem at a school football game or a pep rally. heheheh
(well maybe)
And love your twenties chica!! Live it to the fullest.
Good times:)
Thanks for the RL!! always love to hear from ya sultry one:)
Thanks you so much for the visit:) So glad you enjoyed this.
Been so busy with work and wanted to just do something fun
and I love those anthem songs. I was in the pep squad in school so
I remember the whole - stomp clap stomp stomp clap thing. LOL
Kinda like a cheer in my head except wouldn't have repeated this poem at a school football game or a pep rally. heheheh
(well maybe)
And love your twenties chica!! Live it to the fullest.
Good times:)
Thanks for the RL!! always love to hear from ya sultry one:)
17th Dec 2021 5:57pm
Only memories of my Mustang convertible, racing 130 on the open road...no need to down shift with the wind blowing in your hair :)
18th Dec 2021 2:35am
Hi Tim!!
So glad you commented on this.
Mustang huh. Awesome!!!
Bet those were great memories.
Well let me put it this way.
If your girl was straddling you while you
were driving would you?
I know my hubby did when we were younger. hehehe
The last stanza is vague but yes . . . we sure did go there:) hehehheh
Thanks for visiting amigo.
So glad you commented on this.
Mustang huh. Awesome!!!
Bet those were great memories.
Well let me put it this way.
If your girl was straddling you while you
were driving would you?
I know my hubby did when we were younger. hehehe
The last stanza is vague but yes . . . we sure did go there:) hehehheh
Thanks for visiting amigo.
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18th Dec 2021 10:02pm
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Hahahah. Hey R!
Now come on. I know your screen name says Relic but you are not that old yet. It is all in perspective. You can bam ba bam boom
while cooking dinner or watching a great movie with your girl. When ever the boom hits you.
You'll feel it in the air amigo:)
Thanks for the read and comment.
You rock mister!
Now come on. I know your screen name says Relic but you are not that old yet. It is all in perspective. You can bam ba bam boom
while cooking dinner or watching a great movie with your girl. When ever the boom hits you.
You'll feel it in the air amigo:)
Thanks for the read and comment.
You rock mister!
28th Dec 2021 1:27am
Was married by then so didn't have any fun other than with hubby. Those were the days though!! Nice cadence in this piece. :)
28th Dec 2021 3:16am
Hi L:)
Why thank you!!
I love the Flapper Girl generation. So fashion forward and with some attitude. LOL One day I'm going to get me one of those crystal hair pieces and totally rock it!!
Thanks for commenting and stopping by:)
Why thank you!!
I love the Flapper Girl generation. So fashion forward and with some attitude. LOL One day I'm going to get me one of those crystal hair pieces and totally rock it!!
Thanks for commenting and stopping by:)
28th Dec 2021 3:49am
