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Rose Gold Love
You've got that shine
A star's flame
Waited for you for
Such a long time
Feeling for you
Inside my mind's sky
Now you're finally mine
Sent by the Alchemist from up above
Feeling like Rose Gold cause I'm in love
This metal fits me like a glove
Feeling like Rose Gold cause I'm in love
It's no longer just
You and me
Inside I got
Another heartbeat
Left me stretch mark scars
Shaped just like hearts
Permanent reminder
We'll never be apart
Sent by the Alchemist from up above
Feeling like Rose Gold cause
They were made with love
This metal fits us like a glove
Our babies are Rose Gold cause
They were made with love
A star's flame
Waited for you for
Such a long time
Feeling for you
Inside my mind's sky
Now you're finally mine
Sent by the Alchemist from up above
Feeling like Rose Gold cause I'm in love
This metal fits me like a glove
Feeling like Rose Gold cause I'm in love
It's no longer just
You and me
Inside I got
Another heartbeat
Left me stretch mark scars
Shaped just like hearts
Permanent reminder
We'll never be apart
Sent by the Alchemist from up above
Feeling like Rose Gold cause
They were made with love
This metal fits us like a glove
Our babies are Rose Gold cause
They were made with love
Published 11th Dec 2021
Author's Note
This was first inspired by my leather rose gold shoes. LOL (the avatar)
Then it went somewhere else. Just felt good to write something happy.
I was speaking with my older son and he used the phrase
"It is so metal".
Apparently that is the new word for cool.
I just had to use it.
Then it went somewhere else. Just felt good to write something happy.
I was speaking with my older son and he used the phrase
"It is so metal".
Apparently that is the new word for cool.
I just had to use it.
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11th Dec 2021 3:37am
11th Dec 2021 7:35pm
Thank you Ron!!!
I' m so happy you enjoyed this write.
Just getting into the love amigo:)
I was feeling good and just let it flow.
This time of year always puts a smile on my face.
I was going to wait and post it on Valentines Day
but I am too impatient for that!!!
Thanks for the comment and the RL!!!
I' m so happy you enjoyed this write.
Just getting into the love amigo:)
I was feeling good and just let it flow.
This time of year always puts a smile on my face.
I was going to wait and post it on Valentines Day
but I am too impatient for that!!!
Thanks for the comment and the RL!!!
11th Dec 2021 3:55am
Stretch marks are under-rated
I find beauty in them
Especially in hearts
You worked hard for them
Bring them to me
Wearing those Rad shoes of course
We can drink whiskey and trace your marks
Metal
BIG LIKE
I find beauty in them
Especially in hearts
You worked hard for them
Bring them to me
Wearing those Rad shoes of course
We can drink whiskey and trace your marks
Metal
BIG LIKE
11th Dec 2021 7:44pm
Heheheh.
Hello Mr. Trouble with a capital T!!!
What can I say. I am tiny (5' 1 and 1/2!!!)
No way around those scars.
I look at it like they are war scars. I survived.
From 100 lbs to 150. I bounced back to my original
size but not easy for me at all.
I wish it was one of those pregnancies where I was not sick
all the time. Borderline anemic.
But I survived it all and did it twice.
I am very proud of my survival in the whole thing.
Got scary for a minute. Both times.
Thanks for the comment and the RL amigo!!!!
Hello Mr. Trouble with a capital T!!!
What can I say. I am tiny (5' 1 and 1/2!!!)
No way around those scars.
I look at it like they are war scars. I survived.
From 100 lbs to 150. I bounced back to my original
size but not easy for me at all.
I wish it was one of those pregnancies where I was not sick
all the time. Borderline anemic.
But I survived it all and did it twice.
I am very proud of my survival in the whole thing.
Got scary for a minute. Both times.
Thanks for the comment and the RL amigo!!!!
11th Dec 2021 4:31am
good evening beautiful Adelphina this is beautiful
you're so metal lady
your right it does feel good to say that❤
you're so metal lady
your right it does feel good to say that❤
11th Dec 2021 7:55pm
Hi Crimsin:)
Hahahah. My millennials always seem to surprise me when we have conversations and they throw out new lingo.
My youngest one told me once I had "bars".
I looked at him and asked what that was.
He said -it means you got bars mom.
So I am passing this to you amiga:)
Crimsin has bars!!!!
Thanks for the RL and comment:)
Hahahah. My millennials always seem to surprise me when we have conversations and they throw out new lingo.
My youngest one told me once I had "bars".
I looked at him and asked what that was.
He said -it means you got bars mom.
So I am passing this to you amiga:)
Crimsin has bars!!!!
Thanks for the RL and comment:)
11th Dec 2021 8:25am
Dear A,
I loved the positivity and gratitude of this poem. Your natural sense of meter turned this into a song which was fun and the love of family shone throughout. A real spirit lifter! Really lovely poem. H🌷
I loved the positivity and gratitude of this poem. Your natural sense of meter turned this into a song which was fun and the love of family shone throughout. A real spirit lifter! Really lovely poem. H🌷
11th Dec 2021 7:58pm
Hi H!!!
My fellow shoe diva:) Thank you so much. It is a gift for me when
you say this read was a spirit lifter. That is an important mission for me with all of my writing. To send feelings through words.
Always honestly love all of your comments.
Thanks for commenting and the RL
My fellow shoe diva:) Thank you so much. It is a gift for me when
you say this read was a spirit lifter. That is an important mission for me with all of my writing. To send feelings through words.
Always honestly love all of your comments.
Thanks for commenting and the RL
11th Dec 2021 10:38am
Hi A
Love the poem, gorgeous imagry
There's definetly love walking around there. Seems you and the alchemist above converse quite a bit :)
💜💜💜
Love the poem, gorgeous imagry
There's definetly love walking around there. Seems you and the alchemist above converse quite a bit :)
💜💜💜
11th Dec 2021 8:04pm
Hi Whyme:)
Thank you so much. I'm so honored you loved the poem.
We do converse quite well. hehehe
Just feeling good last night and wanted to see where it took me.
First started with my shoes then blossomed into something else.
Thank you for the read and the RL!!!
Thank you so much. I'm so honored you loved the poem.
We do converse quite well. hehehe
Just feeling good last night and wanted to see where it took me.
First started with my shoes then blossomed into something else.
Thank you for the read and the RL!!!
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22nd Dec 2021 3:20am
Hey Angel……..this is awesome my friend……..a reminder that inspiration can come from anywhere…….luv to read your talented creations……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Dec 2021 3:52am
Awhhh!! Thank you:)
You just gave me an early Christmas gift amiga.
Sending you a rose gold hug right this second:)
You just gave me an early Christmas gift amiga.
Sending you a rose gold hug right this second:)
