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Snow Globe
she
turns the key
shakes vigorously
music plays,
white glitter showers
pretty presents
under a sparkly tree
she
looks in
with wonder
where she lives
nothing
is like what she sees.
turns the key
shakes vigorously
music plays,
white glitter showers
pretty presents
under a sparkly tree
she
looks in
with wonder
where she lives
nothing
is like what she sees.
Published 2nd Dec 2021
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2nd Dec 2021 1:22am
Just gorgeously poeted, Ursa.... I absolutely loved it. Crisp, poignant and moving...
Outstanding ink, my dear poetess
🌹 - 💙
B
Outstanding ink, my dear poetess
🌹 - 💙
B
2nd Dec 2021 12:59pm
Dear BV, thank you so much. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time for commenting kindly here, and for the RL honour.
warmly,
ursa 💜
warmly,
ursa 💜
2nd Dec 2021 3:12am
2nd Dec 2021 1:00pm
Hello Styxian, thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comment. Hope that you have been keeping well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
warmly,
ursa 💜
2nd Dec 2021 4:21am
Dear U,
I couldn’t help but think of all the dreams I held as a younger person as I read this. Glittering and hopeful. I thought the use of the snow globe was a playful and very creative depiction of hope. Lovely write. H🌷
I couldn’t help but think of all the dreams I held as a younger person as I read this. Glittering and hopeful. I thought the use of the snow globe was a playful and very creative depiction of hope. Lovely write. H🌷
2nd Dec 2021 1:03pm
Dear H,
thank you for your lovely comment; such a perfect reflection on this piece, I appreciate that so much.
Hope you're well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
thank you for your lovely comment; such a perfect reflection on this piece, I appreciate that so much.
Hope you're well.
warmly,
ursa 💜
2nd Dec 2021 11:22pm
I feel this nice poem is framing hopes.
The approaching Christmas... Its aura and karma.
... ... ... ...
The approaching Christmas... Its aura and karma.
... ... ... ...
3rd Dec 2021 11:54am
I like the pointed and expansive nature of this write.
Instantly, I could hear and even see... Chimes.
Such beauty in brevity, in stillness and movement,
like a moment, captured, a moment fleeting,
Leaving me with a feeling of joy and sorrow, simultaneously.
Wonderfully executed.
Instantly, I could hear and even see... Chimes.
Such beauty in brevity, in stillness and movement,
like a moment, captured, a moment fleeting,
Leaving me with a feeling of joy and sorrow, simultaneously.
Wonderfully executed.
