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the good old days
sitting in front
of my coffee
the world turns
to shit,
what else is
new.
windows afraid
to look outside.
caught in the
crosshairs
of the day,
the sink throws
up in disgust,
not one damn
good revolution
in the air.
where are all the
mad men?
the manifestos?
the Caesars?
probably riding
around in hybrids,
monetizing
YouTube.
how far away from
the Gods we have
fallen.
Published 30th Nov 2021
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30th Nov 2021 12:24pm
I really like you writing.
It's simply put, and always packs a punch.
You dont use unnecessary fancy words. You write for everyone not just a few. I dig that.
It's simply put, and always packs a punch.
You dont use unnecessary fancy words. You write for everyone not just a few. I dig that.
30th Nov 2021 2:48pm
That is one of the greatest compliment that I have ever received, nik. That sums up my overall style completely. Bless you and many,many thanks.
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty.
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty.
30th Nov 2021 6:05pm
Love this. ❤
I know you asked for critique, but that's all I got, sorry. The word well is dry.
❤k
I know you asked for critique, but that's all I got, sorry. The word well is dry.
❤k
30th Nov 2021 6:23pm
7th Dec 2021 3:46pm
It's a mad mad world when 16 year olds are raking in millions while others are struggling to make it. I do wonder though what effect this will have with the next generation.
Nice write bk. It's thought provoking.
Nice write bk. It's thought provoking.
7th Dec 2021 5:45pm
