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a beautiful moment
you sculptured me
your knife cutting at my side
pulling out the darkness
tearing me inside
you drew my lips
and tongued your way into my ear
bringing new found life
one that had disappeared
to avow
a willingness to openly share
the bleeding wounds
the scars
the fear
I grabbed upon your thorns
not caring getting cut
the blood a symbol
forever lain in trust
to taste, to tease
day breaks
gently the sun kisses your eyes
breezes push to the east
I lick the smile from your face
a soul sits in close contentment
breaths hesitate and release
your knife cutting at my side
pulling out the darkness
tearing me inside
you drew my lips
and tongued your way into my ear
bringing new found life
one that had disappeared
to avow
a willingness to openly share
the bleeding wounds
the scars
the fear
I grabbed upon your thorns
not caring getting cut
the blood a symbol
forever lain in trust
to taste, to tease
day breaks
gently the sun kisses your eyes
breezes push to the east
I lick the smile from your face
a soul sits in close contentment
breaths hesitate and release
Published 22nd Nov 2021
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23rd Nov 2021 3:39am
Wow you have depicted the carving and cuts of love, the healing of scars in an awesome poetic way! Kudos for this sublime poem of appreciation. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
23rd Nov 2021 5:45pm
23rd Nov 2021 5:18am
This is a beautiful moment.
But even better - it can keep going.
Loved the last stanza.
Licking the smile.
Sometimes I do that do my hubby. LOL
Makes him laugh.
But even better - it can keep going.
Loved the last stanza.
Licking the smile.
Sometimes I do that do my hubby. LOL
Makes him laugh.
23rd Nov 2021 5:45pm
23rd Nov 2021 1:46pm
Oh yes! the tongue in the ear sending tingles down your spine as I make my way into your mind playing with the darkness pulling it out from inside. And I lick the bleeding wounds, appreciating the depth of your scars. So many thorns created by so much pain, they can cut deep but you know you are alive. Adoring the taste and the tease, putting a smile on your face as you lick it from mine. A beautiful write Tim.
23rd Nov 2021 5:48pm
Thank you Kristina, the joy of making another smile as they emerge out of the darkness even if only for a fleeting moment..I do enjoy those tingles down the spine...divine xoxo
