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Presumptions
don't stagger up
the garden path
if the door isn't yours
there might be vipers
in the grass
don't wonder at what they said
if you don't know who's it for
curses in whispers might be shelled out
for one other than you
don't think smiles are for kisses
and gloomy faces are for bitter tears
closed eyes are not blind
laughter is not always kind
the garden path
if the door isn't yours
there might be vipers
in the grass
don't wonder at what they said
if you don't know who's it for
curses in whispers might be shelled out
for one other than you
don't think smiles are for kisses
and gloomy faces are for bitter tears
closed eyes are not blind
laughter is not always kind
Published 22nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
Personal battling with pain
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Nicely penned truths that affect many, Grace. I can wholly relate.... Loved the open and honest feel.... Such creativity with your metaphoric imagery....
You're definitely not alone in sharing versions of what you've so aptly described....
Thanks for that sharing, .... it's nice knowing we're not alone!
🌹 - 💙
B
You're definitely not alone in sharing versions of what you've so aptly described....
Thanks for that sharing, .... it's nice knowing we're not alone!
🌹 - 💙
B
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22nd Nov 2021 9:15pm
Laughter is not always kind. Indeed. best to ignore and look the other way. Kisses, Robert.
22nd Nov 2021 10:30pm
22nd Nov 2021 9:42pm
Such all the aspects of life that we must all fight against...... There are those such as I that will always look at you in truth and lend support. Humanity still exist. Excellently pinned ,🙂
MrM, thank you for reading and RL🌹true indeed. What we see is not always what it is. Life is such.
23rd Nov 2021 10:01am
Well said and true . Each line gives a fine poetic advice wow!
Laughter isnt always kind yes. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment on my newest poem too.
Laughter isnt always kind yes. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment on my newest poem too.
23rd Nov 2021 12:45pm
