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Your death
As you hear my strangled cry you try to hide the lies. Your deception breaks my heart and tears me apart.
Never have I felt pain quite like this. Never have I tried not to miss.
Your words are shit I cant believe I loved you. My feelings now, I want to spit on your fucking grave.
I want to sing and dance around it yelling HIP HIP HOORAY!!
That will be the day im happy that will be the day I shine
So please my dear dont forget to die.
Never have I felt pain quite like this. Never have I tried not to miss.
Your words are shit I cant believe I loved you. My feelings now, I want to spit on your fucking grave.
I want to sing and dance around it yelling HIP HIP HOORAY!!
That will be the day im happy that will be the day I shine
So please my dear dont forget to die.
Published 4th Mar 2012
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4th Mar 2012 4:14pm
What is this "my feelings now I want to..." thing? It doesn't make sense..? And ouch, sam. This is pretty harsh..... I like it.(:
Oh, then put a comma after "now", maybe? I think it might make more sense that way. Sorry to be Ms. Grammar, but it helps.
4th Mar 2012 5:01pm
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