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Contentment
Sometimes it just disappears
As fast as it came
Melancholy days with no sun rays
Changing seasons given as reasons
Knowing that only self help
will work for me
It's been like this for years
But it'll be ok again
As nobody is to blame
As fast as it came
Melancholy days with no sun rays
Changing seasons given as reasons
Knowing that only self help
will work for me
It's been like this for years
But it'll be ok again
As nobody is to blame
Published 19th Nov 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
19th Nov 2021 10:57pm
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19th Nov 2021 11:00pm
19th Nov 2021 11:11pm
Have you tried alcohol to mask the despair? I think Christmas will also help you rediscover that feelgood factor you've been missing. I'm listening to Leona Lewis' 'One More Sleep track. That might help!
19th Nov 2021 11:15pm
Thanks for the suggestions.. 😄
Christmas is great and Im ok now anyways.. the writing will be more uplifting from now on.. 😄
Christmas is great and Im ok now anyways.. the writing will be more uplifting from now on.. 😄
20th Nov 2021 7:18am
Dear I,
I love how you’ve captured just how some days go. Not everyday can be a stunner and that’s okay. This poem is absolutely wonderful in how you’ve expressed this. Lovely write. H🌷
I love how you’ve captured just how some days go. Not everyday can be a stunner and that’s okay. This poem is absolutely wonderful in how you’ve expressed this. Lovely write. H🌷
20th Nov 2021 10:03pm
26th Nov 2021 00:16am
This is an expression of something we have and missing next moment. We have craving all the time until we get it back or our heart bleeds for it.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Dec 2022 10:45pm
1st Oct 2022 00:01am
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13th Dec 2022 5:11pm
"Melancholy days with no sun rays" you've stated something that's very relatable and true, like it just comes and goes without warning.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
