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secrets
midnight seduces;
i run my fingers
thru the contours of her mind
every thought a creation
of flavour
enhanced with waves
breathing
full on
seduced
the sweet without the sour
each one a dare
to come devour
tongues roll in unison
dancing to one beat
explored,
not wanting to be undone
she quivers and I am there
embracing her body
of work;
page upon page of precision
exposed
to only me and the decision
to go on
pure beauty
slipping between the sheets
where ink has moistened the tip
licking lips
as secrets are exchanged
i run my fingers
thru the contours of her mind
every thought a creation
of flavour
enhanced with waves
breathing
full on
seduced
the sweet without the sour
each one a dare
to come devour
tongues roll in unison
dancing to one beat
explored,
not wanting to be undone
she quivers and I am there
embracing her body
of work;
page upon page of precision
exposed
to only me and the decision
to go on
pure beauty
slipping between the sheets
where ink has moistened the tip
licking lips
as secrets are exchanged
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19th Nov 2021 00:24am
Oh boy, this is magnificent. You ran your fingers through my mind and I was immersed in the secrets exchanged there. Every thought a creation from these words and how seductive some secrets can be. I love how you are so skillfully reading her body of work. Making her quiver as you turn each page exposing herself more and more until the tip leaves a trail of ink as the secrets are exchanged. :p
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Certain secrets are meant to be exchanged... the places the mind takes us to the body wishes to go... thank you dear K xo
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19th Nov 2021 1:22am
Each stanza flashes such a passionate picture.
Tongues rolling - waves breathing - fingers contouring the mind.
All embracing the secret or secrets. There could be many secrets:)
This is awesome:)
Tongues rolling - waves breathing - fingers contouring the mind.
All embracing the secret or secrets. There could be many secrets:)
This is awesome:)
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19th Nov 2021 2:41am
I'd like to see you working this magic downtown at the Scorpian Bar and Grill
Powerful and thrilling words Tim
The women are swooning ...
BIG LIKE
Powerful and thrilling words Tim
The women are swooning ...
BIG LIKE
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