dare not

Thanks BP

On of your best that I have read ... great flow ... engaging ... well done Tim ...

Thanks DF, very kind to say

I like the timeless feel to this, euphoric the moments, quite nice!

Thanks NG....there is an aire of beauty to that time

good evening dearest Tim wow this is smokin
you are true artist of passion
the ending of this is spectacular
make a woman melt...

can I tell you honestly
I think you've fully evolved as an artist
you were always passionate but this is another level of excellence❤

Thanks Brenda, it means a lot

You painted this picture mister.
Loved the whole thing but this line was vivid to me.

Attention gripped that gently glides
Wow!!

Thank you A, that stands out for me too

Good afternoon, :)  
I read (almost) all that you write and have, since arriving on DU. The distinct sensuality and discovered depths of pure molten passion, flow to epic proportions, with this piece. I adore the empowerment of creative subtlety. I can fully feel the consideration you took in your word selection and phrasing, which really glistens and takes this to a higher-echelon, Tim.

I 100% agree with Brenda. You've taken your already gorgeously portrayed zeal for eroticism and found a way to improve upon. Growth and enraptured beauty... Ohh yes! it's a marvelous experience to behold and even better to read. *wink

Thank you for leaving us with such enjoyable poetry to devour.

Warm regards,
🌹 - B

Thanks B, if you're trying to make me blush you've succeeded 😊

oh Tim, this is so incredibly erotic

Thanks journey, we all like erotic