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Being meek just reeks
There's a certain point
when being meek just reeks
and you're no longer weak
clasping a bright shining sword
raised as a warning and ward
you draw a line in the sand
[shag carpet actually]
and you finally make a stand
this living room is your land
and encompasses all
including the settee and couch
begone you four legged slouch
don't you growl you grouch
I will fight for what is mine
and sit on the couch to dine
sipping a lovely red wine
WITHOUT any begging canines
when being meek just reeks
and you're no longer weak
clasping a bright shining sword
raised as a warning and ward
you draw a line in the sand
[shag carpet actually]
and you finally make a stand
this living room is your land
and encompasses all
including the settee and couch
begone you four legged slouch
don't you growl you grouch
I will fight for what is mine
and sit on the couch to dine
sipping a lovely red wine
WITHOUT any begging canines
Published 13th Nov 2021
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13th Nov 2021 6:09pm
13th Nov 2021 7:57pm
Unfortunately, this is not my pup who passed away just 3 weeks ago. However, she owned the couch and begged with a very cute demeanor all the while using Jedi mind tricks on me saying "feed me". Dog germs don't scare me, I'm formidable. Thank you for your words.
13th Nov 2021 8:40pm
13th Nov 2021 8:36pm
14th Nov 2021 1:30am
14th Nov 2021 8:15pm
This is great!!!
Mine has his special spot on the couch.
I have mine so it's all good:)
Mine has his special spot on the couch.
I have mine so it's all good:)
14th Nov 2021 8:43pm
This was such a fun write I just found lying around [on the couch]. hugs
15th Nov 2021 00:36am
That picture is just adorable. My Mom's cats do Jedi mind tricks all the time. They control me but sometimes you have to make a stand. Still, I suppose I am meek because I cannot help but giving in to anything with fur. Do you have fur? :p Loved this.
15th Nov 2021 3:20am
This was beyond fun to write. I wrote it and read it what I wrote and started laughing. I could see myself, broom as sword, cutting board as shield, going to war over a place to sit on the couch. Wars have been fought for less. Big hug.
15th Nov 2021 4:00pm
