Focus

Or ride it with reigns in hand a guide it's way.

This is absolutely beautiful, just like you, and I'm glad the ink sat too closed to the edge and spilled.

Thank you so much 🥰.  It’s always such a pleasure to see your support here, thank you for reading ❤️.  

On the bright side, a total lack of focus means one isn't grinding on something negative or positive. So in a way, there is a balance achieved.

And Bonus Points for a poem that makes people think.

Thank you so much for reading, and for the RL, Johnny!

Many obligations makes striving for balance necessary, perhaps focus being one of those obligations. I like the “focus” placed here!

Thank you so much!

It's hard to find that balance and yet it seems more difficult to find that focus, striving to be a better version of ourselves encompasses patience, understanding, and so many other factors. Your piece here brings that light as it "dangles...just within [your] straining grasp".

Phenomenal write.

I didn’t realize I had missed comments on here, and I never want to miss an opportunity to show my gratitude for your support, Wally - thank you!

That thundering.... the pounding, within .... Having so many thoughts..... THOSE things to say, to freaking emote.... and not quite being able to fully wrap your hands around the words..... in the way.... THE WAY that you're desperately needing to and how that inner desire fully beckons.....(are my thoughts after reading this true gem)

I loved this, Luna...
You speak (write) from a wise, wise place....
I wholly thank you for taking us there!!

Here's to finding 'your writer's groove'... Sometimes there's nothing like it!
🌹-💙
—B

I’m so sorry I missed your comment.  Thank you so much, Blue.  It’s always such an affirmation when your words resonate.  Thank you for reminding me I’m not alone xo

Your last stanza is great.  I enjoyed reading it all.

LJ

I’m sorry I missed your comment, thank you so much for reading and for your comments 💜

What others call sensitive or particular is perhaps very receptive to the finer threads of the spiderweb.  

I can believe that your hunger for balance is an expression of talent

Thank you so very much, Loki.  I appreciate you!

There is something deeply relatable in this. I found myself reading this over three times. Your words and the pictures they form are very grabbing. I like this very much!

Thank you so much for your support, and thank you for stopping by 💜!

..............we are always a delicate balance.............just a step away from the loonie bin.            Regards, Robert.

We are, indeed!  Thank you for reading!