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Addicted
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
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Sending strength your way...
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Mar 2012 5:23pm
3rd Mar 2012 6:41am
I feel your pain in every word here Rachel...why does the heart go against the mind??? Your words speak so loudly for so many. I hope your mind won this battle and whatever drug you down is gone. Great Write
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re: Sending strength your way...
3rd Mar 2012 1:05pm
I am happy to say that I am clean and sober. :)
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot!
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot!
My list
3rd Mar 2012 3:37pm
Man cannot live without joy; therefore when he is deprived of true spiritual joys it is necessary that he become addicted to carnal pleasures. Great write. Kudos to you. This goes in my reading list.
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re: My list
3rd Mar 2012 4:15pm
Even your comments are poetic :)
What an honor to be entered in your list!
Thank you so much. ;)
What an honor to be entered in your list!
Thank you so much. ;)
re: re: My list
3rd Mar 2012 5:06pm
Rachel...I have hopes for a great income/outcome in your poems. You deserve nothing less than a great comment. However my comments will never compair to your poems.
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re: re: re: My list
4th Mar 2012 00:56am
Reliance
3rd Mar 2012 9:16pm
Is an evil thing , not a neccessity as we believe and when we realise , we break free , nice rhyme and metering rachel :)
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re: Reliance
4th Mar 2012 00:56am
Beautiful!
6th Mar 2012 2:56am
There is so much to be found in the brightest dark :) the addiction of pain or of painful people appeals to even the strongest of us. I absolutely love this piece. x x
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re: Beautiful!
6th Mar 2012 3:48am
You are so right. Thank you so much for your comment and thinking it worthy of your list. Truly means a lot to me. :)
re: re: Beautiful!
6th Mar 2012 3:52am
Its worth is beyond my list, I hope you REALLY know how talented you are. I am privileged to have read it, not the other way around :)
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re: re: re: Beautiful!
6th Mar 2012 3:46pm
Addicted .....
10th Mar 2012 00:10am
A honest open read indeed to play upon the harp strings / bow strings of the heart. A mark well made
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re: Addicted .....
10th Mar 2012 4:35am
Re: Addicted
24th Aug 2012 3:07am
"Weakened by your fiery blaze". Yes Rachel you are on fire!! Enjoyed this very much.
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