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Addicted
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
Published 3rd Mar 2012
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- Edited 3rd Mar 2012 5:23pm
3rd Mar 2012 6:41am
I feel your pain in every word here Rachel...why does the heart go against the mind??? Your words speak so loudly for so many. I hope your mind won this battle and whatever drug you down is gone. Great Write
3rd Mar 2012 1:05pm
I am happy to say that I am clean and sober. :)
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot!
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot!
3rd Mar 2012 3:37pm
Man cannot live without joy; therefore when he is deprived of true spiritual joys it is necessary that he become addicted to carnal pleasures. Great write. Kudos to you. This goes in my reading list.
3rd Mar 2012 4:15pm
Even your comments are poetic :)
What an honor to be entered in your list!
Thank you so much. ;)
What an honor to be entered in your list!
Thank you so much. ;)
3rd Mar 2012 5:06pm
Rachel...I have hopes for a great income/outcome in your poems. You deserve nothing less than a great comment. However my comments will never compair to your poems.
4th Mar 2012 00:56am
3rd Mar 2012 9:16pm
Is an evil thing , not a neccessity as we believe and when we realise , we break free , nice rhyme and metering rachel :)
4th Mar 2012 00:56am
6th Mar 2012 2:56am
There is so much to be found in the brightest dark :) the addiction of pain or of painful people appeals to even the strongest of us. I absolutely love this piece. x x
6th Mar 2012 3:48am
You are so right. Thank you so much for your comment and thinking it worthy of your list. Truly means a lot to me. :)
6th Mar 2012 3:52am
Its worth is beyond my list, I hope you REALLY know how talented you are. I am privileged to have read it, not the other way around :)
6th Mar 2012 3:46pm
10th Mar 2012 00:10am
A honest open read indeed to play upon the harp strings / bow strings of the heart. A mark well made
10th Mar 2012 4:35am
24th Aug 2012 3:07am
"Weakened by your fiery blaze". Yes Rachel you are on fire!! Enjoyed this very much.
