deepundergroundpoetry.com
Writing poetry
Writing poetry , for me,
Is a form of escapism.
I write poetry to escape
My daily reality.
I write poetry to bring out
And chase away the devils in me.
I write poetry to invent good,
Bad and ugly fantasies.
I write poetry to chase after
Beauty , fun, and pleasure,
Not to say immense relief,
Some contentment and
A shade of happiness.
I write poetry to bring some life
To the life that I do not have.
To the life that is not in me.
Is a form of escapism.
I write poetry to escape
My daily reality.
I write poetry to bring out
And chase away the devils in me.
I write poetry to invent good,
Bad and ugly fantasies.
I write poetry to chase after
Beauty , fun, and pleasure,
Not to say immense relief,
Some contentment and
A shade of happiness.
I write poetry to bring some life
To the life that I do not have.
To the life that is not in me.
Written by
robert43041
(Viking)
Published 4th Nov 2021
| Edited 5th Nov 2021
Author's Note
Written, in part, for a competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 1
comments 22
reads 538
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 11:07am
It's a very nice poem, Robert. It really summarizes why people write poetry.
1
Re: Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 12:31pm
Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 12:39pm
As a reader of your poetry, I am glad you write poetry. Thanks and hugs, (O)-(O) xo
1
Re: Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 2:28pm
Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 4:30pm
Beautifully stated robert. We all have our reasons.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
1
Re: Re. Writing poetry
4th Nov 2021 5:59pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Nov 2021 8:42am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Writing poetry
5th Nov 2021 1:49pm
Glad I'm playing in your brain abit...ok. I small degree of (positive?) influence? Regards, Robert.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
11th Nov 2021 5:14pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Writing poetry
11th Nov 2021 5:28pm
No. Not at all. You and I both know that we submitted items that were way way way out in left field and totally contrary to the specified rules. (I actually asked them to remove mine). You must agree that our poems were not at all what they were looking for. For now, I am quite sure you are working on a submission to my competition: Christmas Crime. Can't wait to read that....Kisses, Robert.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
11th Nov 2021 6:14pm
<< post removed >>
Re. Writing poetry
Anonymous
18th Nov 2021 6:24am
<< post removed >>
Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 3:17pm
So you do not write for an audience other than yourself? If so, why do you post it to a public forum.
0
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 3:25pm
I write in order to ''liberate'' myself and possibly to meet with ''kindred souls'' here and there. No claim that I possess special skllls (like some.......and I deleted your ramblings on that mail message)..
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 6:18pm
How funny, since you have never demonstrated that my posts were ramblings, not to mention not on point. I take it that what you want here is praise, not analysis of the quality of your submissions and that you can't stand it when people not only claim that you do not write well but provide solid and articulate evidence that their claims are true.
In any case, are you going to try to meet the Alexandrine challence I sent you?
In any case, are you going to try to meet the Alexandrine challence I sent you?
0
Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 3:23pm
This is essentially a series of declarative sentences -- i.e. prose in line breaks. And dull prose at that. since there's no any concrete appeal to the senses here, let alone any consistent or recognizable meter. What's here that would make a reader feel or experience anything or make them see something with their eyes shut?
0
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 5:27pm
For people (namely you?) who have huge aspirations (Poet laureate in sight?), I refer you (again) to Edmund Soencer's Fairie Queene.
36,000 lines. Over 4,000 stanzas of Spencerian stanzas which consist of:
8 iambic pentameter lines
PLUS 1 line of six iambic feet (an alexandrin).
All our efforts pale very greatly against such. Even your efforts..............
36,000 lines. Over 4,000 stanzas of Spencerian stanzas which consist of:
8 iambic pentameter lines
PLUS 1 line of six iambic feet (an alexandrin).
All our efforts pale very greatly against such. Even your efforts..............
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 6:46pm
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 7:03pm
I asked you to post something in "the Alexandrine form". How telling me how Spencer wrote, instead of doing what I asked you to do is a pretty good indication that you know you have no ability to produce something in this form, not to mention that by your own criterion of what it takes for someone to be deserving of the title "poet", you are not among those who rightly bear it.
Are you going to produce something in "the Alexandrine form" (which is not the same thing as writing a few lines in 6 iambic feet) or not?
In any case, thanks for attacking my person instead of dealing with what I said. It shows what kind of a man you are.
Are you going to produce something in "the Alexandrine form" (which is not the same thing as writing a few lines in 6 iambic feet) or not?
In any case, thanks for attacking my person instead of dealing with what I said. It shows what kind of a man you are.
0
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 7:08pm
Re: Re. Writing poetry
26th Dec 2021 7:21pm
I'm surprised that you recognize "huge words". In any case, an attack upon a person is exactly what ad hominems are.
https://www.txstate.edu/philosophy/resources/fallacy-definitions/Ad-Hominem.html
They are also fallacious and wholly off point.
https://www.txstate.edu/philosophy/resources/fallacy-definitions/Ad-Hominem.html
They are also fallacious and wholly off point.
0
Re: Re. Writing poetry
You are toooooooo silly. Don't bother me anymore.
C'est un message
Pour un poète
Au beau futur
Mais au présent
Hardu et dur
Espoir travail
Vont mener loin
Succès un jour
Et Nobel sur.
C'est un message
Pour un poète
Au beau futur
Mais au présent
Hardu et dur
Espoir travail
Vont mener loin
Succès un jour
Et Nobel sur.