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Suicide
Another suicide this morning
In the métro.
What an awful, but assuredly
Quick way to go.
A person must be truly desperate
From Dark Thoughts to deed to go
And decide to end it so.
No matter all the help lines
No matter all the ways offered
No matter all the pains and sufferings
On those left behind,
The moment is chosen.
No more travails, no more pains
Alea Jacta est.
One thought and I go
Before I go insane.
In the métro.
What an awful, but assuredly
Quick way to go.
A person must be truly desperate
From Dark Thoughts to deed to go
And decide to end it so.
No matter all the help lines
No matter all the ways offered
No matter all the pains and sufferings
On those left behind,
The moment is chosen.
No more travails, no more pains
Alea Jacta est.
One thought and I go
Before I go insane.
Published 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
I've had suicidal thoughts at times in the past and these are never far away in the subconscious. I fight. All the time.
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2nd Nov 2021 9:29pm
Powerful write ... I was on the cusp once ... my true rock bottom ... that was a lifetime ago ... nice resonating pen ...
2nd Nov 2021 9:38pm
3rd Nov 2021 3:02am
a young girl I know of twenty five died this week of Fentanyl overdose her family couldn't accept her same sex orientation she was such a bright light it grieves me she is gone...
this hit home...
this hit home...
3rd Nov 2021 3:10am
Rejection by family is possibly the worst. My condolences....Regards, Robert.
3rd Nov 2021 11:18am
Never stop fighting it, it's all we can do. Strength and peace to you, poet.
3rd Nov 2021 2:44pm
4th Nov 2021 00:09am
This hit home with me as well.
Deep breaths and counting helps til it passes.
Hang in there:)
Deep breaths and counting helps til it passes.
Hang in there:)
4th Nov 2021 00:43am
4th Nov 2021 2:34pm
Mental Health is becoming a bigger issue every year, too many folks feel like there is no way out. It's pretty disheartening but that's the world we live in.
4th Nov 2021 4:02pm
Sadly. I also think that the term ''mental health', maybe nebulous in that the person may end up being ''disturbed'' due to heavy financial stress or stress of any other kind. We are not always talking about something as defined in the DSM3 or whatever. If the pressure is toooooo much the person may just decide to end it. Agreed?
