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Trust
The whimsical
in a state of molecule
travels in a flourish
Into
the
Abyss
In
Particles
Dispersed
Like pieces
of all of
This
Life,
[Circulating
percolating]
Amongst
pieces
of
Death
&
Detritus
[Like all of them
and all of us]
This I trust.
This I trust.
Published 30th Oct 2021
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30th Oct 2021 11:25am
Another deep insightful write ... goes well with my venti dark roast ... well penned Cipher ...
31st Oct 2021 1:04pm
This is perhaps true Lil.
(Must be if you have perceived it to be... btw... started drinking coffee again maybe a month ago?...:)))
Thank you so much my friend.
(Must be if you have perceived it to be... btw... started drinking coffee again maybe a month ago?...:)))
Thank you so much my friend.
30th Oct 2021 1:52pm
I wish I could feel even that sort of trust... sigh... sadly, I guess for me. It should be easy to trust in the way of nature and the certainty of ashes to ashes dust to dust , etc (is my mind's impression of what your poem is alluding at) trusting, my dear poet... even that which is fact based, seems hard to do, this morning.....
Hopefully I get some of my wherewithal, back soon....
Nice thought provoker....
🌹 - B
x
Hopefully I get some of my wherewithal, back soon....
Nice thought provoker....
🌹 - B
x
31st Oct 2021 1:06pm
Big hugs Blu.
I totally relate to these things...
Sometimes or even most times or even all the time
the only thing that can be trusted is chaos...
or that nothing can be trusted, perhaps...
Nevertheless...
I am with you the whole way through.
FTW
I totally relate to these things...
Sometimes or even most times or even all the time
the only thing that can be trusted is chaos...
or that nothing can be trusted, perhaps...
Nevertheless...
I am with you the whole way through.
FTW
