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Twinkle Twinkle
She reached for the stars
but they were really far
so she reached for a rope
and hung all hope from it.
but they were really far
so she reached for a rope
and hung all hope from it.
Published 19th Oct 2021
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19th Oct 2021 7:09pm
Nicely done ... love how the "rope/hope" rhyme is buried in the last line ... most effective ...
19th Oct 2021 10:22pm
deeply expressive
Your photo accents to create... more feeling.
I was stirred
Your photo accents to create... more feeling.
I was stirred
19th Oct 2021 11:18pm
23rd Oct 2021 4:19am
28th Oct 2021 2:17am
Excellent spill. It Carrie’s the heavy burden of sending the message that some folks will choose an easy way out while others bear the pain of loss
I kinda wanna sit across a table from you and split a few j’s, just listening to you spit one line dark fairy tales.
There’s a grim comedy act in that reverie somewhere
There’s a grim comedy act in that reverie somewhere
