Violet

Hi!

Thank you so much!
I'm jazzed the lines swayed for ya:)
I just kept hearing the tunes in my head.
Had to write before it vanished.

Thanks for your comment.

Dear A,

This was great. Before I even read your authors note I was singing this more than reading it. Violets are pretty and any mention of a cello wins me over, it’s such a lovely instrument. Terrific writing.
H🌷

Awh thanks H!

I had been itching to write a song which I love to do.
The CEO at my job married a cellist from Germany.
Love how they sound. Such a deep rich sound.
Thanks for the RL!!!

and as always - stopping by for a comment:)

Beautiful wordplay and symmetry.

Thoroughly enjoyed.

Hey Cipher!!

Thank you so much.
Coming from you I take that
as a huge compliment!!!

Thanks for commenting and the RL amigo

Wow..this is very impressive.
Very very good word choice, line breaks, imagery, and style. I am definitely a fan of yours:)

Hey!

I got a wow and a very very!!
Thank you so much.
Always feels great when someone appreciates my work.

Thanks for the comment

And you're nice to your fans ☺️
Very cool!

Dude!!  
I am the coolest!!
Cipher's Mad Hatter poem test said so. LOL

And of course I'm nice to my fans.
Putting your original work out is kinda scary.
Always a little nervous before I push the submit button.

Absolutely.
I get anxious each time.
I'm very thankful of readers too.
They make me a better poet.

Wow, you are the coolest! Your writing is so creative and versatile, I love it! I agree with the other comments, a mixture of urban and floral delight for sure. A burst of colors and scents. You certainly have no reason to be nervous pushing the submit button but I totally understand. I am the same way. :p Your lyrics are awesome...  

Hi Kristina!!

Thank you for your snaps chica!
In that case - you are the sultriest! LOL
That is a word right? Me and my typo nightmares.

I can't help being nervous. My poetry is sacred to me.
Like one of my children. LOL
Hope that makes sense.

Thanks for commenting!!

I love the sound of the cello.
It has such a menacing beautiful tone.


Thanks for checking it out.
You are making my day!!!

Hello

I like to go back to the start of a collection to get to know a reader. This was the one that peaked my interest.

There’s something so beautiful about the repetition of the colour violet, and that alliteration of feelings. It adds this rather lively lyrical feel to the words. It marries perfectly to the tune of the violin — I smiled when I thought of the hands sliding the neck of the instrument. How it all became one big symphony.

Gorgeous.

That ending of “don’t play me violins” is this gorgeous declaration of not needing sympathy.

It would be interesting to actually hear this piece to music as it’s marked as song lyrics. It feels like it should be playing on a Paris street in the sunshine.

Thank you for sharing this, I thought it was a stunning little read.

-M

Hi Missy:)

Thank you for checking this out. I just had that chorus in my head.
And I love the color violet and the flower. I spent the day at my desk just jotting down words with the letter V.  
Came home in a rush and started writing.
This one didn't take too long.  
I remember on the podcast when Faith said poems write themselves. That's what happened with this one.

thank you so much for this wonderful comment.  
and the RL:)

I was about to think myself quite clever and say this read like a song….

The. After reading you comment about not having written a song I started to unpat myself on the back 😅

This would be interesting to hear it sung

Thanks for the read

Hi:

So glad you enjoyed this little write of mine. LOL
Please do pat yourself on the back. It could be either or.
I think most poetry could transition into a song quite easily. Just
pick your favorite line or stanza and repeat it late in the piece:)

Thanks for checking this out!!!