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THE MAGIC OF HOLDING HANDS
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The path from the
cabin door to the lake
is long and winding;
today it is being covered
with the drifting leaves
as nature changes clothes.
We finish our coffee,
choose a light sweater
for our casual walk
to the lake... the birds
are serenading us with
melodies and love calls
to one another... we hold
hands listening and feeling
the magic that flows over us.
Without saying a word
we both feel the sensual
connection between our hearts
created by the magic of holding hands.
How amazing are the ways
love is communicated by lovers.
May I take your hand?
The path from the
cabin door to the lake
is long and winding;
today it is being covered
with the drifting leaves
as nature changes clothes.
We finish our coffee,
choose a light sweater
for our casual walk
to the lake... the birds
are serenading us with
melodies and love calls
to one another... we hold
hands listening and feeling
the magic that flows over us.
Without saying a word
we both feel the sensual
connection between our hearts
created by the magic of holding hands.
How amazing are the ways
love is communicated by lovers.
May I take your hand?
Published 14th Oct 2021
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
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14th Oct 2021 4:03pm
Anonymous
14th Oct 2021 6:24pm
I like how you've taken the reader along on that walk of two lovers. We see the carpet of autumn colours, hear the echoes of the birds, feel the chill in the air and the warmth of that person's hand. Very well written.
14th Oct 2021 8:43pm
14th Oct 2021 9:50pm
14th Oct 2021 9:52pm
15th Oct 2021 1:11am
This is autumn magic romance.
I love the warmth holding hands gives during the cold weather.
Your own personal thermal blanket in the form of a hand.
Great write
I love the warmth holding hands gives during the cold weather.
Your own personal thermal blanket in the form of a hand.
Great write
16th Oct 2021 4:42am
Ahhh.... We're kindred spirits, methinks ;)
... holding hands...Mmmm... My most recent poem ends with that very action.... Truly romantic...and intimate.
Beautiful ink, Oral
🌹 - x
... holding hands...Mmmm... My most recent poem ends with that very action.... Truly romantic...and intimate.
Beautiful ink, Oral
🌹 - x
