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I Fade
I'm tired
Don't want to say a word
Lost for words
Speechless
Like light in twilight
I fade
I am soul tired
Bone weary
And times wearing me down
I don't want passion or lust
To chase or be chased
I'm at the farthest point of a different need
I fade under the weight of hours and days
Just to earn a wage
All I want is to fade into the soft
Lean back into you
No words or few
Arms around me
Touches that heal
Let you leech away the pain
And draw forth the weary
Let the hours mean something more
If I just laid here would you cover me
Without texts or TV
Just breath
Soft against me
Would you take the time to bring me back to life
Let me remember when
Until I could feel again
I'm tired beyond knowing
Love isn't all roses
Don't want to say a word
Lost for words
Speechless
Like light in twilight
I fade
I am soul tired
Bone weary
And times wearing me down
I don't want passion or lust
To chase or be chased
I'm at the farthest point of a different need
I fade under the weight of hours and days
Just to earn a wage
All I want is to fade into the soft
Lean back into you
No words or few
Arms around me
Touches that heal
Let you leech away the pain
And draw forth the weary
Let the hours mean something more
If I just laid here would you cover me
Without texts or TV
Just breath
Soft against me
Would you take the time to bring me back to life
Let me remember when
Until I could feel again
I'm tired beyond knowing
Love isn't all roses
Published 10th Oct 2021
Author's Note
12 hour days for months on end...I'm burnt out
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10th Oct 2021 00:36am
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10th Oct 2021 00:44am
Work, oft converts us all into robots but it’s better than living in poverty !
Sounds like you need a good soak in a deep flower essence bath, followed by a deep tissue massage with essential oils before fading into arms that can hold you & your gaze beneath the ambience of sandalwood scented candles…💙
Sounds like you need a good soak in a deep flower essence bath, followed by a deep tissue massage with essential oils before fading into arms that can hold you & your gaze beneath the ambience of sandalwood scented candles…💙
10th Oct 2021 00:52am
10th Oct 2021 00:45am
You are a trooper!!
And even better dedicated.
Tired and still yearning for that feeling of softness and companionship
Knowing you are not in it alone in the bump and grind
Hang in there!
And even better dedicated.
Tired and still yearning for that feeling of softness and companionship
Knowing you are not in it alone in the bump and grind
Hang in there!
10th Oct 2021 00:54am
10th Oct 2021 1:55am
Dear AJ,
Love is not always roses. Some days it’s only the thorns. I know I can’t adequately comment on how perfectly you have defined being so tired even your bones weep for a rest.
“ No words or few
Arms around me
Touches that heal” this is the tonic that will cure any ail. Already I can feel my shoulders relaxing. Yet again, you’ve written a poem of art! H🌷
Love is not always roses. Some days it’s only the thorns. I know I can’t adequately comment on how perfectly you have defined being so tired even your bones weep for a rest.
“ No words or few
Arms around me
Touches that heal” this is the tonic that will cure any ail. Already I can feel my shoulders relaxing. Yet again, you’ve written a poem of art! H🌷
10th Oct 2021 2:07am
10th Oct 2021 3:49am
Hey there AJ :)
I can relate, sympathize, empathize and just wholly feel the intensity of that wicked exhaustion, to my very deepest core.
I still reverberate from your vivid and phenomenal line of "Let you leech away the pain".... Ohhh My, how I would grasp at that opportunity with both hands of forever....
I hope you make your way to find some much needed restful and restorative sleep.... the kind that lasts for days.... within her arms.
Thank you for sharing with us-🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I can relate, sympathize, empathize and just wholly feel the intensity of that wicked exhaustion, to my very deepest core.
I still reverberate from your vivid and phenomenal line of "Let you leech away the pain".... Ohhh My, how I would grasp at that opportunity with both hands of forever....
I hope you make your way to find some much needed restful and restorative sleep.... the kind that lasts for days.... within her arms.
Thank you for sharing with us-🙏🏻
🌹 - B
10th Oct 2021 6:28am
Been napping off and on, now I'm up in the middle of the night. Lol, can't win. Likely OT thru to Christmas...
But thank you for the sweet thought, B. Just no rest for the weary here. 🌼
But thank you for the sweet thought, B. Just no rest for the weary here. 🌼
10th Oct 2021 10:42am
I spent thirteen years working long hours through the night and sleeping during the day. Didn't really have a life. Certainly no time for relationships. Now I have more free time, but I'm not necessarily happier. Love seems almost impossible. I can't even imagine it.
Keep writing. That's the best tonic for a lonely heart.
Keep writing. That's the best tonic for a lonely heart.
10th Oct 2021 12:47pm
Thanks for the advice.
I'm willing to chance less work more free time for a while tho' 🙄😁
I'm willing to chance less work more free time for a while tho' 🙄😁
10th Oct 2021 3:15pm
I can feel the weariness in this poem. I'm in the same state as yours though in a different way for months now and I want to get out of this. I can't wait to return to my normal routine. It's a lovely poem.🙂🌹
10th Oct 2021 3:37pm
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11th Oct 2021 10:52am
I feel this one Aj
I know many with a similar plight
Here's to rest and reclaiming
BIG LIKE
I know many with a similar plight
Here's to rest and reclaiming
BIG LIKE
11th Oct 2021 9:12pm
11th Oct 2021 10:09pm
Well you always cast a beautiful flame here AJ. I don't think you will ever burn out of beautiful words. Still I could definitely feel the weariness in this one. It seems like there is a never ending amount of work and it can definitely wear us down. My work has me on a 24/7 electronic leash. The business is International so there is always a time zone working. That seems to be the way of things these days. I hope things calm down for you so you can catch your breath.
11th Oct 2021 10:21pm
12 hour days get old, up at 4 in bed by 9. Blessed today, the computers went down and I was outta there. 😉😁
11th Oct 2021 10:24pm
Ha, you sabotaged the computers did you? lol.
So few things can be done without computers any more. The whole world would stop if all the computers went down.
So few things can be done without computers any more. The whole world would stop if all the computers went down.
11th Oct 2021 10:44pm
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