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Empty Rooms
Vacant soul
vacant mind
what once lived
deep inside
has either moved on
or just died
Published 8th Oct 2021
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8th Oct 2021 7:08pm
Or ... its a foreclosure ... like the house next to me ... nice write nikki ...
Anonymous
8th Oct 2021 7:30pm
Enjoy the use of the straight cretic foot
VA-cant SOUL
VA-cant MIND
WHAT once LIVED
etc.
Nice effect; good use of an exotic, non-standard meter.
Enjoyed!
VA-cant SOUL
VA-cant MIND
WHAT once LIVED
etc.
Nice effect; good use of an exotic, non-standard meter.
Enjoyed!
12th Oct 2021 5:29am
Dear N,
For me, I like this as a metaphor to my mind and the vacancy that’s left behind every time I cut out an emotion. Provocative piece. H🌷
For me, I like this as a metaphor to my mind and the vacancy that’s left behind every time I cut out an emotion. Provocative piece. H🌷
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