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What!
Just one of those days
But I feel so wonderful
Some on my ass too
But I feel so wonderful
Some on my ass too
Author's Note
My pooch, 2 hours of sticky ball removal, expression…priceless 🐶🤍
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5th Oct 2021 11:56pm
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5th Oct 2021 11:58pm
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6th Oct 2021 00:01am
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6th Oct 2021 00:24am
Thinking about the comment I didn't post ....
Good job
Awesome hound
BIG STICKY LIKE
Good job
Awesome hound
BIG STICKY LIKE
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6th Oct 2021 00:28am
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6th Oct 2021 2:16am
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6th Oct 2021 2:33am
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I wanna see your ass, l bet it's as cute as the picture. Not one day every day . And a dog is loyal woof woof . xx James 💛💙 YWKISA . Nyx
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6th Oct 2021 3:35am
😅 I’m told my ass is cute. But yeah he’s very loyal and very smart. He has just a regular dog ass, wow I’m tired! 💛💙 MWKISA
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6th Oct 2021 3:31pm
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7th Oct 2021 2:15am
Hey Goddess…….my almost 2 year dog gets in trouble here or I sure wouldn’t read him for anything…….so luving and precious…….enjoyed this……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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7th Oct 2021 2:20am
Hey! Awesome, we love them no matter what! 🐶
So glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment
NG 🌹
So glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment
NG 🌹
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2021 5:26am
If you read the poem without the picture a whole other scene comes to mind. lol. You tricked me on that one.

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8th Oct 2021 1:32am
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7th Oct 2021 6:43am
Dear NG,
Nope. Too cute. Playful and lighthearted. Just the ticket for today. And then I read Scorpio’s comment and dang if it isn’t true. There’s a whole other read in there. 😀 makes it even clever-er-er. Sweet write. H🌷
Nope. Too cute. Playful and lighthearted. Just the ticket for today. And then I read Scorpio’s comment and dang if it isn’t true. There’s a whole other read in there. 😀 makes it even clever-er-er. Sweet write. H🌷
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8th Oct 2021 1:34am
I’m so glad it brought a happy moment! Yes so funny about Scorpio, I didn’t realize it 😂
Thank you 🌹
Thank you 🌹
Re. What!
7th Oct 2021 8:49am
Had so many metaphors running in my head until I saw the note. Reminded me of my dogs obsession with a skunk that was trapped behind the hot tub heater.
Dogs have that ability to get into such predicaments and then naturally display the most sorrowful looks.
Dogs have that ability to get into such predicaments and then naturally display the most sorrowful looks.
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8th Oct 2021 1:37am
I’m seeing all the possible meanings of the poem before the picture loads, very funny!
I’m thankful no skunks, wow! I have 2, a boy and a girl labradoodle and the boy always comes back a mess, the girl hovers over the grass I think and never has a mark in her lol.
I’m thankful no skunks, wow! I have 2, a boy and a girl labradoodle and the boy always comes back a mess, the girl hovers over the grass I think and never has a mark in her lol.
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7th Oct 2021 3:51pm
Oh how darling ... I just took my pup to play in the flooded pasture ... we both got soaked ...
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8th Oct 2021 1:41am
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Nothing like a roll in the hay😍 The last line is hilarious...evokes memories of my Old English Sheepdog, Waldo and all of his mischievious exploits. Brava, Night Goddess...thanks for the smile❣🌹 Oh and the title should have a question mark like whats you look'n at? Perfect title.
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8th Oct 2021 5:14pm
Hi! The last line lol, yes he was proud he had it there too! Oh definitely agree about
“What?” He was definitely thinking that! “What!” Is from me… It’s all I could say when I opened the door to his mess. So glad it brought a smile. I love your comment.
Thank you 🌹
“What?” He was definitely thinking that! “What!” Is from me… It’s all I could say when I opened the door to his mess. So glad it brought a smile. I love your comment.
Thank you 🌹
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9th Oct 2021 11:14pm
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10th Aug 2022 1:12am
Very cute tribute NightGoddess.... you have wonderful skills in Senryu :)
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10th Aug 2022 1:16am