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Flesh
words
fall like rain
upon
naked flesh
hour by hour
the passion
builds
fingers dance
searching the depths
of my core
the waves
arrive
one after another
until sated
intoxicating
the scent of us
lingers
filling the room
fall like rain
upon
naked flesh
hour by hour
the passion
builds
fingers dance
searching the depths
of my core
the waves
arrive
one after another
until sated
intoxicating
the scent of us
lingers
filling the room
Published 5th Oct 2021
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5th Oct 2021 3:13am
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5th Oct 2021 1:22pm
words,
as to a symphony
the fullness of the page,
line after line
the stroke of a sage.
enrichment, the sublime
as if the quill sat first chair.
so we have the scent
of the poet's dare.
nice are your words that form the poem.
who erotic you made the poet's dance
as to a symphony
the fullness of the page,
line after line
the stroke of a sage.
enrichment, the sublime
as if the quill sat first chair.
so we have the scent
of the poet's dare.
nice are your words that form the poem.
who erotic you made the poet's dance
5th Oct 2021 3:55pm
5th Oct 2021 3:45pm
Delightful write ... soothing ... engaging ... the short lines sustain the cadence ... the line breaks are stunning ... a definite keeper ...
5th Oct 2021 3:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
6th Oct 2021 6:22pm
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6th Oct 2021 6:33pm
I'm glad someone was thinking of putting this to music. I can imagine violins getting louder.
6th Oct 2021 9:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
8th Oct 2021 6:18pm
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8th Oct 2021 9:17pm
