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With You
I want
to sit here
with YOU
learning the secrets
of your soul
as the silence
echos
through these trees
and when darkness
falls upon us
we'll hang
our saccharine dreams
upon the moon
while we
fall in love
with the stars
to sit here
with YOU
learning the secrets
of your soul
as the silence
echos
through these trees
and when darkness
falls upon us
we'll hang
our saccharine dreams
upon the moon
while we
fall in love
with the stars
Published 4th Oct 2021
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4th Oct 2021 1:11am
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4th Oct 2021 1:18am
Dear J,
Ditto Ron. This is a really love filled and romantic write. A balm to soothe the soul. H🌷
Ditto Ron. This is a really love filled and romantic write. A balm to soothe the soul. H🌷
4th Oct 2021 1:19am
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4th Oct 2021 1:42am
Well, I'm a sucker for this kind of write so I don't know how objective I am, but I like what I like! 🌼
4th Oct 2021 1:56am
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4th Oct 2021 2:25am
You will get a better view of the stars from the moon, that's for sure! Does silence have an echo?
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