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cold
there is something surreal about your anger
I can reach out and touch it
disturbing the crimson surface
it spits in my face
rage so real I can feel it calculating
just how to end it
insidious need to be understood in blood
hurt so deep inside it's an infection
a reflection of systematic rejection
by the so called normal society
I step back and realize for the most part they're just actors
no one fits within the torture
purging you of your most intimate feelings
stripping your rights until rage surfaces
telling you don't do this and that
then featuring the onslaught of destruction on the news feed
another died alone today for your viewing pleasure
carnivorous glee the gawkers hungry for the show
it's so cold out there
I'll stay inside today and pretend
the beauty of the world is for us equally
Published 4th Oct 2021
Author's Note
inspired by this song...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2s3iGpDqQpQ
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4th Oct 2021 2:40pm
I like the description of "the crimson surface". There's some good phrasing here.
4th Oct 2021 3:03pm
6th Oct 2021 1:40pm
Korn is one of my favorites, for shore.
This reads like you are seeing very deeply into a person,
and having an other worldly understanding of different aspects of them,
made without judgement or discrimination.
This makes me wonder what the response would be,
by the person being seen, in such a circumstance?
this is very interesting.
I tend to think that the dark does not like to be seen, perhaps?
or perhaps it varies from individual to individual.
I think I have seen others in this way,
and that was my impression, perhaps.
Nice thought provoking write, Crimsin.
This reads like you are seeing very deeply into a person,
and having an other worldly understanding of different aspects of them,
made without judgement or discrimination.
This makes me wonder what the response would be,
by the person being seen, in such a circumstance?
this is very interesting.
I tend to think that the dark does not like to be seen, perhaps?
or perhaps it varies from individual to individual.
I think I have seen others in this way,
and that was my impression, perhaps.
Nice thought provoking write, Crimsin.
21st Oct 2021 7:12pm
my apologies dearest Cipher this was inspired quite a bit by one of the songs you shared...yes the darkness doesn't always appreciate what I can see I thank you for sharing your thoughts here💗 as for my seeing I told you I was weird...
20th Oct 2021 3:23am
Your depiction of the color and rage is spot on. It’s easy to lose control and not give a fuck at the moment.
Strong write
Strong write
21st Oct 2021 7:13pm
good morning dearest Wally thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts have a great day today💗
