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Re. Broken
3rd Oct 2021 6:59pm
Not all the seeds love sows brings forth a rose. A tight telling of a sad truth 🌼
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Re: Re. Broken
3rd Oct 2021 7:12pm
Re: Re. Broken
3rd Oct 2021 7:19pm
Re. Broken
Ohh, ouch!!.... I felt this one, Summer
Endings are always sad and possibly difficult to reconcile.... getting closure, etc ... You really deliver that emotional place, of never really reaching a relationships full potential, with brevity and clear succinctness....
Some great ink.
🌹 - B
Endings are always sad and possibly difficult to reconcile.... getting closure, etc ... You really deliver that emotional place, of never really reaching a relationships full potential, with brevity and clear succinctness....
Some great ink.
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Broken
3rd Oct 2021 9:33pm
Thank you Blue 🌹. I'm glad you felt the emotion. I appreciate your visit.❤️
Re. Broken
4th Oct 2021 00:57am
Dear S,
Heavy sigh. How many times I’ve experienced this very situation. And the pathetic thing is the person on the receiving side of my undying love never even knew it. This poem wrapped up these feelings so tidily for me. Achingly lovely. H🌷
Heavy sigh. How many times I’ve experienced this very situation. And the pathetic thing is the person on the receiving side of my undying love never even knew it. This poem wrapped up these feelings so tidily for me. Achingly lovely. H🌷
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Re: Re. Broken
4th Oct 2021 3:08am
Thank you dear H🌹 honored for the RL. I'm happy that you can relate to this write.
S
S
Re. Broken
4th Oct 2021 10:28am
Such beautiful pain or beauty that grows from pain.
Captured perfect.
Wonderfully done.
Captured perfect.
Wonderfully done.
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Re: Re. Broken
4th Oct 2021 12:02pm
Re. Broken
4th Oct 2021 8:02pm