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Wild Flowers
There are far fields of wild flowers
That speak whenever you are near
Like spring days after rain showers
A magic only I can hear
Unfold to me your petals, Love
Gentle sway as tho' kissed by breeze
Warm glowing as the sun above
You so soulfully move with ease
Moments timeless as country places
Sweet the buzzing of the air
Open softly your ribbons and laces
Til your heart of hearts lays bare
In your eyes rise hopes like mountains
And whisper a depth like seas
With laughter like golden fountains
Your fair magic enchanting me
That speak whenever you are near
Like spring days after rain showers
A magic only I can hear
Unfold to me your petals, Love
Gentle sway as tho' kissed by breeze
Warm glowing as the sun above
You so soulfully move with ease
Moments timeless as country places
Sweet the buzzing of the air
Open softly your ribbons and laces
Til your heart of hearts lays bare
In your eyes rise hopes like mountains
And whisper a depth like seas
With laughter like golden fountains
Your fair magic enchanting me
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Re. Wild Flowers
3rd Oct 2021 7:51pm
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3rd Oct 2021 8:22pm
Thank you. I don't usually go with classically rhymed poetry so I'm glad it worked for you. 🌼
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3rd Oct 2021 9:05pm
Re. Wild Flowers
3rd Oct 2021 9:38pm
I am with you, AJ! I am not a rhyming poet, myself but let me say, with verve, that this pretty and tender poem of yours, flows with so much fluidly that it's impeccable. You don't miss a beat and it makes for a gorgeous read.
I was captivated -
🌹 - B
I was captivated -
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Wild Flowers
3rd Oct 2021 11:03pm
Thank you, B. Open/free style verse works better for me too! "With verve" I'll need to remember, that's something that's not said every day!
Thanks again for being my temporary captive! 🌼
Thanks again for being my temporary captive! 🌼
Re. Wild Flowers
4th Oct 2021 00:33am
Dear AJ,
You had me at the daisies. Look at you stepping out and using rhyming sequences. Awesomely well, too. It’s a beautiful poem that continues to romance and lull your fan base (me😊) into glorious dreams. Well done. H🌷
You had me at the daisies. Look at you stepping out and using rhyming sequences. Awesomely well, too. It’s a beautiful poem that continues to romance and lull your fan base (me😊) into glorious dreams. Well done. H🌷
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4th Oct 2021 00:43am
That's me, the guy with the cheap bouquets 😉
Care to share a dream or do I need to wait until I'm older and more mature emotionally? 😁🌼
Care to share a dream or do I need to wait until I'm older and more mature emotionally? 😁🌼
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4th Oct 2021 1:17am
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4th Oct 2021 1:24am
Re. Wild Flowers
4th Oct 2021 3:00am
hello dearest Joe my god this is beautiful
I love nature and wild flowers are my favorite
so lovely is this write💗
I love nature and wild flowers are my favorite
so lovely is this write💗
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Re: Re. Wild Flowers
4th Oct 2021 3:15am
I'm just a country boy who dreams. I'm glad you could feel the beauty of this dream, my friend 🌼
Re. Wild Flowers
5th Oct 2021 5:50am
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5th Oct 2021 6:31am
Then my words have spoken true of both nature and women, thank you very much 🌼
Re. Wild Flowers
5th Oct 2021 11:44pm
I find it hard to deviate in my rhyming love, and this poem is the reason why. So beautiful in its purity, and refreshingly old fashioned! Love the rhythm too!
💞💞💞
Margo
💞💞💞
Margo
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Re: Re. Wild Flowers
5th Oct 2021 11:54pm
Thank you Margo. I like old fashioned and romanticism in poetry, although I don't often try to rhyme but it seem to have worked this time. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts 🌼
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12th Dec 2021 4:25pm