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Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
Inspired by—
CLANN - "I Hold You" https://youtu.be/uNGmyQ8UbZ8
O'
my purest heart
it's you.
(always)
of
fathomless promise
of
thine own breath
eternal whispers
loyalties
exponentially
endless
you are known
to me, mine
h e r e
I
a m
a l w a y s
H E R E
I've GOT YOU
behind closed eyes
ethereal
zephyr
flutter
f L i E s
it's
ALL
peacefully alright
as my tears
pulverize
into mist
and smokey
lifetime plumes
a love never undone
musical bliss
airswept
through me
forevermore
in singsong
I will continue
We destine forge
Oh, to rage!
lustrous abandon
contrasting,
in solemn tinged vows
betwixt
that very
first moment and
rising in purity of grace
(I HOLD YOU)
Yes
this storm of ours
never, not one doubt
to cross or fleet
We are infinite stars
upon the winds
legends for aye
r e s t n o w
Your breath
I breathe
mine—yours
fragile-strong
willingly captured
Ours
are lungs on fire
to face this dearest life
closer~ than close
pressed
together
Ours
is a perpetuity
never-ending
I am here,
I've got you.
CLANN - "I Hold You" https://youtu.be/uNGmyQ8UbZ8
O'
my purest heart
it's you.
(always)
of
fathomless promise
of
thine own breath
eternal whispers
loyalties
exponentially
endless
you are known
to me, mine
h e r e
I
a m
a l w a y s
H E R E
I've GOT YOU
behind closed eyes
ethereal
zephyr
flutter
f L i E s
it's
ALL
peacefully alright
as my tears
pulverize
into mist
and smokey
lifetime plumes
a love never undone
musical bliss
airswept
through me
forevermore
in singsong
I will continue
We destine forge
Oh, to rage!
lustrous abandon
contrasting,
in solemn tinged vows
betwixt
that very
first moment and
rising in purity of grace
(I HOLD YOU)
Yes
this storm of ours
never, not one doubt
to cross or fleet
We are infinite stars
upon the winds
legends for aye
r e s t n o w
Your breath
I breathe
mine—yours
fragile-strong
willingly captured
Ours
are lungs on fire
to face this dearest life
closer~ than close
pressed
together
Ours
is a perpetuity
never-ending
I am here,
I've got you.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 3rd Oct 2021
| Edited 10th Oct 2021
Author's Note
For the "Let me in musically" comp.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12059/
Inspired by:
CLANN - "I Hold You" https://youtu.be/uNGmyQ8UbZ8
©Blu2021
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12059/
Inspired by:
CLANN - "I Hold You" https://youtu.be/uNGmyQ8UbZ8
©Blu2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 12:02pm
Simply achingly beautiful
yes..... to be us
a true promise heaven
infunite souls forever colliding
like planets and stars
through time
creating something more
beautiful
yes..... to be us
a true promise heaven
infunite souls forever colliding
like planets and stars
through time
creating something more
beautiful
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 3:02pm
Your comments are so amazing and lovely, C.
I am so grateful that you felt a bit of what I was trying to convey. Thanks for the thoughts, the list add and being in my corner!!
I am so appreciative 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
x
I am so grateful that you felt a bit of what I was trying to convey. Thanks for the thoughts, the list add and being in my corner!!
I am so appreciative 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
x
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 12:13pm
I think that the world is tailor made for jaded.
... I think perhaps there is the ideal and the reality,
and the vast majority do not achieve any aspect of the ideal,
while others are able to catch a glimpse, perhaps,
enough, to know it is real...
But then... It seems like it should be so easy.
Maybe I am a fucking dreamer... haha.
but yes... I think if you have a magical individual,
or better yet... two magical individuals...
Perhaps magic may be achieved...
but then... maybe that is the ideal... (this conceptualization of possibility)
Nevertheless... this piece is infused with the sort of power that is capable of turning the ideal into a reality.
Beautiful.
... I think perhaps there is the ideal and the reality,
and the vast majority do not achieve any aspect of the ideal,
while others are able to catch a glimpse, perhaps,
enough, to know it is real...
But then... It seems like it should be so easy.
Maybe I am a fucking dreamer... haha.
but yes... I think if you have a magical individual,
or better yet... two magical individuals...
Perhaps magic may be achieved...
but then... maybe that is the ideal... (this conceptualization of possibility)
Nevertheless... this piece is infused with the sort of power that is capable of turning the ideal into a reality.
Beautiful.
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 3:13pm
Wow, C.
What phenomenal sentiments, my friend!!
You're definitely not alone, I'm totally a fucking dreamer too and always will be. I am proud of that fact! I get that I must be practical when I have to be... but that's not nearly as fun!!!... lol
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading my little poem and found some beautiful things, too .
That's always one of my hopes, in the end....
Mostly that I am satisfied and able to live with what I've written (let's face it, I'm not never 100% about anything but close, sometimes) and if there's even a small sense of magic that I pull from my dreams, it's that I am able to maybe just maaaaybe also have the luck to scatter a bit of sunshine or thought provoking...as well.... Nice wishing, methinks!!
You're always so very welcomed here with your awesome coolness and now, your acclaimed trophy 🏆 winning poetry :) YES!
You rock and I appreciate the thoughts, the list add and all your kind support.
Much much love, your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
What phenomenal sentiments, my friend!!
You're definitely not alone, I'm totally a fucking dreamer too and always will be. I am proud of that fact! I get that I must be practical when I have to be... but that's not nearly as fun!!!... lol
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading my little poem and found some beautiful things, too .
That's always one of my hopes, in the end....
Mostly that I am satisfied and able to live with what I've written (let's face it, I'm not never 100% about anything but close, sometimes) and if there's even a small sense of magic that I pull from my dreams, it's that I am able to maybe just maaaaybe also have the luck to scatter a bit of sunshine or thought provoking...as well.... Nice wishing, methinks!!
You're always so very welcomed here with your awesome coolness and now, your acclaimed trophy 🏆 winning poetry :) YES!
You rock and I appreciate the thoughts, the list add and all your kind support.
Much much love, your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 2:14pm
This reminded me of a dance I saw once, very beautiful. I like that your words to me there.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 3:00pm
Hey there, Lj
I very much like seeing your face back among us!!
Thanks so much for the lovely sentiments-🙏🏻
I'm so glad I could kinda take you dancing this morning.. (ha! *wink) .... and you saw a bit of beauty.... How cool! 😎
Your visits are a lovely pleasure ✨
and I'm grateful for them, always.
🌹 - 💙
B
I very much like seeing your face back among us!!
Thanks so much for the lovely sentiments-🙏🏻
I'm so glad I could kinda take you dancing this morning.. (ha! *wink) .... and you saw a bit of beauty.... How cool! 😎
Your visits are a lovely pleasure ✨
and I'm grateful for them, always.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 2:31pm
You are truly talented I absolutely love your stuff gorgeous. I wish I had half your ability
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 3:22pm
Hey Ron,
You are very very kind , my lovely poet. Just a little reminder that you have enormous talents, of your own rights.... For sure!!👍🏻
I am so humbly grateful that you loved reading and found joy, here. So very heartwarming...and motivating, too. Thanks for all your kindness, your generous list add and for just being here. You've always got my back and I adore that beyond measure...
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
You are very very kind , my lovely poet. Just a little reminder that you have enormous talents, of your own rights.... For sure!!👍🏻
I am so humbly grateful that you loved reading and found joy, here. So very heartwarming...and motivating, too. Thanks for all your kindness, your generous list add and for just being here. You've always got my back and I adore that beyond measure...
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 3:49pm
Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 5:05pm
The promise of everlasting is everything isn’t it? A soulful commitment without end, is quite wonderful.
Beautiful
NG 🌹
Beautiful
NG 🌹
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
You definitely get it, NG!! 👍🏻
I really appreciate you visiting and very much enjoy your thoughtful remarks...The pleasure from a deep connection /commitment is truly enlightening!!
I humbly thank you :)
You're always welcome here, dear lady
🌹-B
x
I really appreciate you visiting and very much enjoy your thoughtful remarks...The pleasure from a deep connection /commitment is truly enlightening!!
I humbly thank you :)
You're always welcome here, dear lady
🌹-B
x
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 6:33pm
You hold on to love and don't let go. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 8:14pm
You speak truths, indeed, dear Francisco!
I really appreciate your faithful readership and the support you show me...
🌹 -
I really appreciate your faithful readership and the support you show me...
🌹 -
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
Undying love
seedlings growing
coalescing
entwined
fighting for sunlight and breath
becoming
a tree
with carved hearts
leaning against our backs
holding us up
as storms come
tearing limbs
and ravaging roots
surviving
in the light
and a new day
eternal
undying love
exists because
we fight
for
love
to grow
.
A spontaneous write, I hope you don't mind.
seedlings growing
coalescing
entwined
fighting for sunlight and breath
becoming
a tree
with carved hearts
leaning against our backs
holding us up
as storms come
tearing limbs
and ravaging roots
surviving
in the light
and a new day
eternal
undying love
exists because
we fight
for
love
to grow
.
A spontaneous write, I hope you don't mind.
1
Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
Your gorgeous words of poetry are the best comments (gifts really) that a lucky lady such as I could possibly receive!! I am so blown away and deeply grateful....
My senses, wholly illuminated; tingling .... Is how I wish reacting to poetry should always be felt
(I wistfully dream).... Just wow,Richard!
A truest heartfelt thanks
and much love, dear friend
My cup runneth over
🌹-💙
B
xo
My senses, wholly illuminated; tingling .... Is how I wish reacting to poetry should always be felt
(I wistfully dream).... Just wow,Richard!
A truest heartfelt thanks
and much love, dear friend
My cup runneth over
🌹-💙
B
xo
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2021 8:38pm
This love is so eternally beautiful in sentiment. Reassuringly everlasting for the recipient. Totally unconditional as real love is.
Perfect.
Perfect.
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Re: Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
3rd Oct 2021 9:05pm
Thanks so much for reading and those kind words of wisdom/insight ... I hope you listened to Clann as well..... I feel like it adds a little bit extra..... hearing the motivation...
you definitely get it,
Ty for that
-B
you definitely get it,
Ty for that
-B
Re. Navigating the permanence of everlasting.
19th Oct 2021 8:27pm
There are songs that hold special meaning to us, then there are songs that take a hold of soul and express the emotions we are feeling.
It's a beautiful song, it's a stunning piece Blue. You got my vote for this.
Amazing.
It's a beautiful song, it's a stunning piece Blue. You got my vote for this.
Amazing.
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