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Longing
input, input
rest, retire
accumulate...
let go desire
wanting, wanting,
letting go
to drift away...
it's as though
in my mind
I am with you
entering your
point of view
becoming one with
how you feel,
to drift away
in surreal
senses dripping
mind embrace,
longing to be
face to face
longing to be
there with you
with my mind
and body too
rest, retire
accumulate...
let go desire
wanting, wanting,
letting go
to drift away...
it's as though
in my mind
I am with you
entering your
point of view
becoming one with
how you feel,
to drift away
in surreal
senses dripping
mind embrace,
longing to be
face to face
longing to be
there with you
with my mind
and body too
Published 2nd Oct 2021
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2nd Oct 2021 10:17pm
It's that tension of desire.... the yearning..... palpably felt, Lawrence!
Nicely poeted - 💙
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Nicely poeted - 💙
🌹-B
2nd Oct 2021 10:43pm
