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SIBERIAN SONG
I am sounding my song.
It is a somber song.
Yet sprinkled with colors,
Hopeful colors.
Like the sparkling shards of pure color.
Refracted by the hexagonal prisms of the
Early morning Siberian snow.
Each, elegant, crystalline, fragile in hue.
Each imbued with its own vision of hope.
Hope of redemption by extreme unction.
I have been exiled.
I am penitent.
I am content.
No, privileged!
To gaze up transfixed,
By the gleaming brass ring.
And the jangle of my jailers bright keys,
And the jangle of electroplated keys.
And the scintillating tinkling of the keys.
It is a somber song.
Yet sprinkled with colors,
Hopeful colors.
Like the sparkling shards of pure color.
Refracted by the hexagonal prisms of the
Early morning Siberian snow.
Each, elegant, crystalline, fragile in hue.
Each imbued with its own vision of hope.
Hope of redemption by extreme unction.
I have been exiled.
I am penitent.
I am content.
No, privileged!
To gaze up transfixed,
By the gleaming brass ring.
And the jangle of my jailers bright keys,
And the jangle of electroplated keys.
And the scintillating tinkling of the keys.
Written by
catnip
Published 2nd Oct 2021
| Edited 5th Oct 2021
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2nd Oct 2021 9:57pm
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5th Oct 2021 1:26am
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Has this been written from prison? It's quite a scientific poem. I can taste both the flavour & sound of freedom here. Nice.
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5th Oct 2021 1:26am
thank you for not only reading but commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me. no it was not written from prison, but my living room
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5th Oct 2021 1:27am
thank you for not only reading but commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me. you are right there needs to be a comma. i will edit the poem
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3rd Oct 2021 1:26am
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5th Oct 2021 1:49am
thanks for your second comment it means....okay I'll stop saying that. i just posted a new poem, check it out. the theme is very sad, but it's not about me
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5th Oct 2021 2:01am
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11th Oct 2021 2:05am
thank you archie for reading some of my poem. there are some coming up that i have no idea what they mean and i wrote them.
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11th Oct 2021 1:01pm
I have written many things which I have yet to publish, and have published many things which I don't know why.
Just write them. You have a means to publish them. You have the skill and support. You have talent and desire to type out the next one.......and....
YOU WROTE THEM
Just write them. You have a means to publish them. You have the skill and support. You have talent and desire to type out the next one.......and....
YOU WROTE THEM
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