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burning breadth
Beseeched to the bending of the bow
the wind had begun to blow
and so had she
the branches begging to breathe
in recesses never once reached
seducing an idle mind
out of the way
where forests felt of man
bent over
out on a limb
she held up to his strength
knowing no way they would fall
in the burning of this tempestuous reign
the wind had begun to blow
and so had she
the branches begging to breathe
in recesses never once reached
seducing an idle mind
out of the way
where forests felt of man
bent over
out on a limb
she held up to his strength
knowing no way they would fall
in the burning of this tempestuous reign
Published 1st Oct 2021
| Edited 2nd Oct 2021
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1st Oct 2021 8:57pm
“she held up to his strength
knowing no way they would fall
in the burning of this tempestuous reign…”
Loved those lines ! Hmm. Tempestuous, is an understatement, feels more like borderline violence ! I think I need a shot of vodka ! LOL
A fine write…🙏😇
knowing no way they would fall
in the burning of this tempestuous reign…”
Loved those lines ! Hmm. Tempestuous, is an understatement, feels more like borderline violence ! I think I need a shot of vodka ! LOL
A fine write…🙏😇
1st Oct 2021 9:21pm
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1st Oct 2021 9:16pm
Definitely no idle mind when it comes to this sexy romp out into the trees. Sounds like he was really giving it to her good but she's able to take a beating. :p Loving this tempestuous reign too. Definitely got my mind going... ;)
1st Oct 2021 9:22pm
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