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seducing the wind
she hiked
her skirt and I captured
a gifted glimpse
of nature
I sensed the seasons in her seduction
changing
bringing out her bold and best
my winds rising in her mountains
red with enticement
enriching the valley's crest
I drank in her waters
as I listened to the echoes howl
one with a view to remember
no turning back, not now
her skirt and I captured
a gifted glimpse
of nature
I sensed the seasons in her seduction
changing
bringing out her bold and best
my winds rising in her mountains
red with enticement
enriching the valley's crest
I drank in her waters
as I listened to the echoes howl
one with a view to remember
no turning back, not now
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3rd Oct 2021 1:00am
Wow, you really whisked me away seducing with the wind through the mountains and flooded the valley with this one. ;) Just gorgeous imagery. I so love the Mountains...the view is spectacular isn't it.
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3rd Oct 2021 2:26pm
i always admire how you keep your imagery classy tim, you don't really see a great deal of that nowadays and you always bring a great deal of justice to it, this really goes places in the imagination
thank you for always taking our minds to places 🙂
-ethan
thank you for always taking our minds to places 🙂
-ethan
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