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Marvel in Unceasing
I watched
You
Stand
over
your
(Self)
Razor blade
slit
over
the
surface
of
your
[Self]
As
Sincerities
seeped
deep
in
opium
Dripped
Drops,
Expressing
a
pain
that
never
Stops.
Published 29th Sep 2021
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29th Sep 2021 12:34pm
Does the expression of pain ever stop? Or is pain the true manifestation of our existence?
Excellent write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Excellent write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
30th Sep 2021 2:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
29th Sep 2021 2:11pm
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30th Sep 2021 2:03pm
29th Sep 2021 6:17pm
Dear CO,
No cut will release pain so deep it’s feral. Only an animal scream would minimally release a tiny portion of the pain. I admire your presentation of poetic thoughts that allow your readers to go layers deeper. H🌷
No cut will release pain so deep it’s feral. Only an animal scream would minimally release a tiny portion of the pain. I admire your presentation of poetic thoughts that allow your readers to go layers deeper. H🌷
30th Sep 2021 2:04pm
30th Sep 2021 4:58am
30th Sep 2021 2:05pm
There's so much dark immense truth that spills out from your pen here, C....
I've read and reread and feel the impact of solidarity in understanding and I reconcile that pain, process it as best and as healthy as I can possibly can.... yet it always persists... if even a tiny dull throb.... it's there.... reminding...
What a poignant and relatable write, for many... I suspect...
Thanks for sharing, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I've read and reread and feel the impact of solidarity in understanding and I reconcile that pain, process it as best and as healthy as I can possibly can.... yet it always persists... if even a tiny dull throb.... it's there.... reminding...
What a poignant and relatable write, for many... I suspect...
Thanks for sharing, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
30th Sep 2021 2:06pm
