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maybe we can create a maze of closed doors
.....old with chipped paint, stained glass
...... so that when the light is right, it will refract deep within our souls
....and all truths will emerge, at last.
.....old with chipped paint, stained glass
...... so that when the light is right, it will refract deep within our souls
....and all truths will emerge, at last.
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21st Sep 2021 2:08pm
You're able to convey such deeply felt want and the need to share one's truths.... what a glorious and creative concept within the minimalism... it's gorgeous, poignant and the brevity is palpable....
I really connected here, ms.
What a truly wonderful write.
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B
I really connected here, ms.
What a truly wonderful write.
🌹 - 💙
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21st Sep 2021 2:12pm
your words...way to kind.
you always make me feel as my words have worth.
thank you.
you always make me feel as my words have worth.
thank you.
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21st Sep 2021 2:34pm
Deeply meaningful and says so much, mystic. How often we wander that maze with the doors closing leading us so often to our own peril. Old with chipped paint really brought back memories of abandoned buildings... how the 'pain't was peeling and flaking on the walls and the smell of mold and mildew. Those were interesting times... Stained glass is beautiful, I love the thought of the light refracting deep in the soul and revealing truths. That's so beautiful. Really love this!
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21st Sep 2021 2:38pm
so glad you were able to connect with the idea.
capturing what was expressed, moreover, implied.
Thank you for reading and commenting
capturing what was expressed, moreover, implied.
Thank you for reading and commenting