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mischief
spiking in rhythm coming on strong then fade
going deeper and deeper the onyx kingdom opens wide
spiraling out of control
I center myself
I find my inner girl spinning
I whisper sit still let me handle this
Crimsin comes forth and growls
demons retreat the mistress is in
mischief and chaos my lovers
they do as bidden
inside the void I am known
flickers of doubt in the eyes of the beholders
I am and was and should always be
delivering the hurt on outlaw spirits
wrangling with devils
I hook one by the horns
look him the eyes and back him off
powers of persuasion I am persuaded to do internal damage
I sink my teeth in and feed eternally
Published 15th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2021 1:15am
Interesting poem:
What I like: the rhythms; the idea of metaphysical space that can be encountered as a physical space / place; the idea of a hunter of "outlaw" demons--not unlike the old Taoist priests, rumored to be able to defeat ghosts / spirits.
What's missing for me: yes, it's possible to defeat demons in this way, but at what cost?
Enjoyed!
What I like: the rhythms; the idea of metaphysical space that can be encountered as a physical space / place; the idea of a hunter of "outlaw" demons--not unlike the old Taoist priests, rumored to be able to defeat ghosts / spirits.
What's missing for me: yes, it's possible to defeat demons in this way, but at what cost?
Enjoyed!
15th Sep 2021 1:27am
hello dearest Mark not really defeating but reeling them in getting them in rank...mine can cause a lot of chaos if not... thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts...
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15th Sep 2021 1:13pm
good morning dearest Poet thank you so much giggles love your comment your so wry❤
15th Sep 2021 2:36pm
Absolutely fascinating.
... I wonder to myself; do you visit these realms and then revisit as you write, or, do you visit as you write?
... I think that there are many methods to attain. But the idea of writing, specifically, as a method of such attainment, is of great interest.
Amazing.
... I wonder to myself; do you visit these realms and then revisit as you write, or, do you visit as you write?
... I think that there are many methods to attain. But the idea of writing, specifically, as a method of such attainment, is of great interest.
Amazing.
15th Sep 2021 10:54pm
hello dearest Cipher I feel connected to the air around me there is away of connecting for lack of a better word with the universes themselves the void as well I just to think of where I'm going and my soul is connected or enters there... writing sometimes facilitates interaction with other beings sometimes in my writing there is a back and forth conversation going on... I'm happy you enjoyed this thank you...
15th Oct 2021 1:17am
Straight up savage, and yet sensual. Love these vampirical entries.
Great stuff crimsin.
Great stuff crimsin.
15th Oct 2021 3:10am
thank you graciously for the sexy comment dearest Wally I deeply appreciate your thoughts💗
